Reviews for Snowbird Triumphant
Kat Wylder chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
This installment may not be as action-packed as the previous one, but every good story needs a denouement.

That said, the final battle was, in a word, phenomenal. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time reading. The air combat and tank/Elemental battles were particularly enjoyable, especially to read it on such a large scale.

Felisanna's little stunt was a real surprise, too, as was her meeting with Kell. The emotional aspect of her new ability is a good touch.
Texray1 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Exquisite. Not much more to say than that.
RougeBaron chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Very nice. Kuritans are smartasses but to acknowledge the help of mercenaries is nice of them. I guess the integrity of Draconis Combine is much more important than who saves it.

And I just started wondering if you abandoned Cavell Malthus. I guess you haven't.
pacificuser chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Thanks for updating Ben! May god bless you and yours! Keep on sharing your god-given gift for words! Please do not neglect me and Felisanna's character.
FraserMage chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Yay... Now this is interesting...
Ghost 1247 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Absolutely a great 1st chapter, please keep going !
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