Reviews for Falling
The.Doctors.Lonely.Angel chapter 35 . 2/18/2012
Update soon please!
NikiPotter274 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Good but it sorta rambles on. Other than that I'm impressed
NikiPotter274 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Good but it sorta rambles on. Other than that I'm impressed
EmilyLupin77 chapter 35 . 11/11/2011
Aww, I thought this was a new chapter :( Ahh well, just gonna keep waiting :D
LilyFlower99 chapter 35 . 11/10/2011
Thank you! I understand now! Oh and this is kind of a stupid question but whats a beta? Can anyone explain please?
Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 35 . 11/10/2011
i could be your beta!
LilyFlower99 chapter 34 . 11/10/2011
Um I thought they were already in their seeventh year? At least u said so in chapter 21? U dont but please fix this I'm confused!
LilyFlower99 chapter 22 . 11/9/2011
So far really good! Just one little thing. In the 39th paragraph you put Lily Potter instead of Evans. Yes its persnickety but just thought I'd let you know!
Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 34 . 11/2/2011
SSJJ92 chapter 34 . 11/2/2011
love it welcome back!
QueenReginaSwan chapter 33 . 7/30/2011
More please asap love it x it's really orginal x
Danceingfae chapter 33 . 7/19/2011
Very wonderful story so far. I always thought that there had to be other friends involved in the marauder years and yours is one of the best I've seen that brings it to life.

I look forward to your next chapter :)
EmilyLupin77 chapter 33 . 7/11/2011
Aww, so sad :'( Love her outfit, though!
Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 33 . 7/11/2011
this is so sad!
dylans girl chapter 27 . 7/11/2011
my guess is the most obvious and only thing i think the stone could be... The ressuruction stone! I really like this story it is well written and assuming you used spellcheck, its well, you have very good spelling and good checking skills. oh , and no i didnt read ahead and pretend to guess, im not tha kind of person.


dylans girl
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