Reviews for Discontent
karen1025 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
wonderful plot, hope there will be more of it soon
ehqueue chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Sweet and bitter-sad. Thanks for writing. I wonder what Riddick is up to?
Page-Mistress chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Simon was kinda a jackass here, at certain points.

And did the kid stop crying when Riddick held him?
Taylen-Swordbreaker chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I quite enjoyed this and thought it was really well done. For being a one-shot you managed to give the characters a natural feel without having to explain about them.
Hidden Relevance chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Oh man this was... wow just wow. You totally captured all of the voices here. How had I never even considered this crossover anyway? Just...man.. intense.
angelwingz21 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
How adorable! I loved it.
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
River was so awesome in this fic. I loved her commentary to her son when Rissick named him.

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie
Elizabeth Cords chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Very interesting.

Just discovering this River/Riddick crossover stuff.

"Interesting" as in, you move past the previous 'action' and just take a moment and crystallize it.

"Interesting" as in Riddick's often quoted line.

:)

About the only thing missing is the swearing in Chinese. ;)

You capture the characters well.
pyrobabe7713 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
This was really good, a little confusing, and I wanted something horrible to happen to Simon for trying to take a newborn away from it's mother but overall I really liked it. I love the River/Riddick pairing and have tried to find more of them on , but there is a sad lack of them. keep up the great work and please feel free to do more of this pairing in the future! _
ArtLightLove chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
You should right more. I enjoyed this. Love the river/riddick pairing!
tambrathegreat chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
What a lovely story. I like the dynamic you set up between the characters. Winter seems to be a perfect name for Riddick and River's son. Great job. Will you be writing more?
UnderworldHybrid chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
That was so good! I've been waiting for another Riddick/Firefly crossover for months and even though this is just a one shot it really captured everything really well! Great job with the River-speak, very her, especially the part where you make her go off on a poetical tangent and end with teaching how to kill with the brain, very nice. All in all, very very well done.
spitfire2962 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I absolutely love this pairing.
purplerocks chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
i love it. you have no idea how much i love this pairing. i just glad that i am not the only one who loves them together. i would love to read how they came to be together but even if you don't do more i am just glad to have this. the story is one of my favorites now.
KLCtheBookWorm chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Got an error. The text is repeated.

Storywise? I didn't think it was possible to fear a newborn baby but you just proved me wrong.
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