|Reviews for Mage Harry|
| noylj chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
You've still got a Riddle body lying around that Bones should have immediately thrown through the veil. You've got a crackpot who have probably NOT told anyone about horcruxes, so Riddle can still come back like he did with the diary. The WW is still 99.9% fools and idiots, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.
I agree, I would like a lot more non-angsty Harry stories where he does have at least the power of Riddle, plus enough more to defeat the two madmen (the one in control of everything and the one who wants control of everything).
| Quackpotty chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
AWESOME STORY! I'm going to go read the last chapter now, but I just wanted to say that quickly. Thanks for the story so far. It's hilarious!
| goldenboy892007 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
bummer no sequel aw well awesome job i liked the ending it was pretty good
| Rori Potter chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
That was amazing.
| karlii chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great job! Highly entertaining and comprehensive. I liked that you tied up the loose ends, and left us satisfied with how things turned out. JKR should take lessons from you! LOL
You did leave some tantalizing bits in there, that could beg the Muse for exponation.. but they do not detract from your story at all.
A fun side story would be what some of the squib death-eaters got up to, and how they learned to get along. You get the idea. Just a thought.
I can't wait to see what else you come up with!
| MarinePotterfan chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great story, thanks for writing
| Bobmin356 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
And now you understand why Harry in the Sun series had a problem with his leg, and was faced with odds that no single person, no matter how powerful, could overcome.
Super Harry's are fun, but they need to be realistically tempered with limitations.
I enjoyed this tale, it was a fun romp even if you left the issues of the Wizengamot/Horcruxes pretty much unresolved.
| Emeric Switch chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
This was a very interesting story. It had a nice progression that made it seem believable - not many super!Harry stories can do that, its all wave a hand and things are right - end of. So well done! I do have to say that I prefer your stories in the third person view. This was not a bad attempt at first person but imo your erm, primary(?) writing style is better. Take it or leave it, I did enjoy reading this story! Thanks
| DukeBrymin chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great finale-nice way to end things. I enjoyed the author's note at the end-I figured that was the one drawback you mentioned earlier. But I like reading "feel-good" stories too, and this is a great one.
Thanks for sharing it!
| bub23453 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great story... you forgot the third and fourth option though. The third that since they're prophesied to get equal power, they both become super powerful. And the fourth; that somebody new comes along even more powerful.
Oh, and if you're taking any ideas, any chance you can do an Azkaban story? I'd love to see one of those!
| doRodrigo chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Loved the story. You are right of course about the super Harry fics, and the way to make it enjoyable. Great work. I'll await your next work.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great ending, ad agree about Super!Harry fics, they're fun to read about how to fix all the idiocy of the wizarding world, which is an iditic place the way JKR wrote it, abut afterwards, either Harry has to go Dark, or that's about it, though agree that Hope is close to having some tension. Lookig forward, and will be curious as to if you might go with a different pair in you next fic as you've done several times before, and how things will go next. Thanks for writing this fun read.
| sabre1492 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
I love the story grate job
| azphxbrd chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Great story overall.I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to reading future up the good work.
| zeropolis79 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009