Reviews for Mage Harry
nayin17 chapter 2 . 1/31/2015
I love stories of powerful Harry as long as he loves Ginny
Tomon chapter 3 . 1/7/2015
So I enjoyed this story even with more than overpowered Harry :) After all you did give Ginny a kitten so everything is allright even though I'm slightly disturbed by the lack of development in feline area afterwards :-P
Anyway good job with this one :)
Tomon chapter 2 . 1/7/2015
Gary Stu once met this Harry, I heard he is still running :-D Okay, sorry, I personaly dislike Mary/Gary mention but this one was just to good to pass. Seems like Voldemort stood no chance against Harry's attraction... :-D
Tomon chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
Heh, for one a really quick get together but... well why not? :-D Interesting story even if I'm wary about inherited power of Merlin
sylvelle chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Cool I'm not sure if I have read this before or not, some is familiar, but not all. Oh well enjoying it again if I have.
Thanks
Tricia
Sleepygirl68 chapter 3 . 12/9/2014
I liked this story. I don't usually read stories written in the 'first person,' but as I liked your other story I read, I decided to give it a shot.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/4/2014
Love this feel good story! I really enjoy this take-charge independent Harry! H&G are also amazing in this story! Thanks!
aheartofwords chapter 3 . 12/4/2014
I wrote a review but apparently I wasn't signed in...ugh. Anyways, this story is by far one of my favourites! Yes, I would love to have 20 chapters of this but what you said in your final author's note is true. I believe it's great the way it is. I love H&G all the time but you've done a fantastic job with their relationship in this fic. It makes so much sense and isn't crazy & over the top. I also love independent Harry, he deserves a bit of time to tell people how it should be! Go Harry! :) thanks for writing this!
Old Lady chapter 3 . 11/16/2014
I really like most of your stories. keep up the good work.
GenkaiFan chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Kevin,
I enjoy your stories and while I am not a CANON fan of Harry/Ginny, you make her a very enjoyable character by giving far more 'flesh and bones' to her than JKR ever did.
Thanks for 'creating' an interesting and believable Ginny out of the skeleton we see in canon!
The Frau
Difdi chapter 3 . 8/28/2014
Thinking about that chair Harry conjured on the platform, I now have this odd image in my head...

A thousand years after Harry's death, Britain could still be littered with thousands of oddly placed pieces of furniture, all in pristine condition no matter how exposed to the elements, that NO ONE is able to damage, move or dispel...and it would be even funnier if they were equally impervious to muggle-repelling charms...
Araytigre chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
All in all, a fun read. It's always fun to see Albus taken down a peg or three, and to take down Severus (as well as several DE's, including the Ferret) is a bonus. I loved the prank with Narcissa and the Malfoy Vault, that was priceless. Glad to see that they had more than the one child that most of the "Purebloods" have had (with few exceptions including the Greengrass', the Weazley's, and you could include the Patil's in there too). It might have been fun to see who Neville and Luna ended up with, or if at all, but it wasn't really necessary with this story. Fortunately, Harry had the foresight to provide himself with, oh I guess a limiter by any other name, in Ginny, in order to keep himself down to Earth so to speak. Although, one could wonder just what those "Adventures" are, are they pranks, or what? Thank You. TTFN
N Flamel chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
Now I'm glad that I held off reviewing the first two chapters, especially the first. Your comfort with the first person POV increased with each chapter, making the story easier to read the further we got into it. By the third chapter, even though everything filtered through Harry, the narration was much smoother and less "I" centered.

On to the story itself: it was a bonanza for H/G enthusiasts, with their relationship developing quickly and easily. Part of that can be attributed to how you wrote them - as being destined for each other and extremely compatible - plus Harry's Mage abilities solving any logistical problems. While these abilities minimized any troubles he or the couple could have had, it was still lots of fun to see what new powers or skills he developed, which you did with lots of creativity. Dumbledore's continued testing of Harry and trying to find out about his powers was hilarious. For an intelligent person, he can be very dense at times, and you captured that well, especially how Harry pulled his chain without him knowing it (most of the time).

Lastly you ended the story at the appropriate time. Another chapter would have been 'same old, same old, even with your storytelling abilities. As always, your work and creativity are greatly appreciated. - N Flamel
FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
Ah reminds me of a dimension hopping Harry fic I've read where hopper!Harry told current dimension Harry to say "accio Tom Riddle's Head"
sanabalis chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
Love the story! :) I always enjoy "feel good/super!harry" stories, and this one is one of the better ones. :)
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