|Reviews for Officer Goodbody|
| Bella503 chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
lols da devil!thts wat my friends call me
| P. Fitzherbert chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
You legend, your writing is like an art, i could look at it all day. :)
| Lady China chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
great chapter! cant wait for next one
| redemptionsong chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
Loved it. You never disappoint, do you? I LOL'd at this line: “Hello little girl. Can you put your daddy on the phone?” the man cooed.
Nessie sounds like an awesome aunt. As usual, looking forward to reading more :)
| DELEEEEETE chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
| acirelemagne chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
I just can't wait for the mouse incident! awesome chapter! love jake calling his dad about her, that was cute! great work!
| Samboroo chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
I liked it. I can't wait for Jake's pov to the Bella being the author whose name I'm so sorry that I can't remember. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Featherbrained chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
Love this chapter! Nessie sure does get put in handcuffs a lot. P
And the last line was hilarious!
| SethsWolfGirl chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
The chapters just keep getting better and better. Update soon!
| MACHOxMAN chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
OFICER GOODBODY! This is so funny! I'm sorry, but I'm not in the mood of giving lengthy reviews, so you'll just have to trust me when I say, this story is great. And I think I might wanna check out Raising Bella. If it's good enough to keep a great author like you up into the night, it has to be good.
_MachoMan_keep writing por favor!
| FadingEmotion chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
can't wait for more! :)
| CrystaLiiine chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
lol. i loved this chapter too. it was really good and funny to, and i love to laugh 3
| Leah-The Writer chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
I love this -you have an amazing talent for humour!
i laughed... a lot.
my fave part was... when Jake was Talking to Billy.
and the last line? awsome!
| goooooooooooooooo chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
I love Jacob's nickname for Nessie.
I think the same thing about cartoons, when I was little I didn't learn anything from them, except how to argue. (duck season, rabbit season)
| Coza chapter 2 . 7/24/2009