Reviews for Her Tears
iiquickivy0u chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This is such a sweet story :) I wish it were longer and had a little more shikahina love in it though. lol. you nailed the characters so perfectly :)
xXx.TheSeductreSs.xXx chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Aw this is so sweet! And really well written. I've never read any Shikamaru/Hinata stories, but this is awesome. And points for having a weakness for crying women, thats so cute!
chellythemadhatter chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
A weakness for a crying woman, eh? Chivalry is alive and well in..well, wherever you're from. Anyhoo, on with the review! This story is absolutely fabulous. Aside from a few minor typos, there is nothing wrong with it. You kept true to every single character and the situation was handled beautifully. Although I do question whether or not Shikamaru would have it in him to kiss Hinata's head, but it still flowed nicely despite this. Good times! Keep up the wonderful work.
leiaah chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Meh... this is really cute and carries a lot in it.

You're really a great writer.
Roving Otter chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I've never really thought of Shikamaru/Hinata as a pairing before, but I can see how it might work, even if this technically wasn't a pairing story. I liked how Shikamaru realized she was more fragile than the women he was used to dealing with and treated her more gently. And I always thought it might be healthier for him to be with someone who WASN'T so much like his mom...

Only noticed one error. "Her timidity was quite amusing and gave her a smirk." I think you meant "gave him a smirk." Also, this might be a matter of differing styles and tastes, but it seems like you use more words than you really need when describing something. "Liquid collected on her eyes until the pull of gravity was strong enough to drag it to earth like drops of rain" is kind of a convoluted way of saying "tears ran down her face."

Overall though, I liked this and hope you write more for these two in the future.
ShadowOfAShinobi chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
aw! Thats so sweet! And i liked your story! Shika may be lazy but he cares. :)
meow-ee chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
May I ask a question, senpai?

Are you... um... a male? Because if you are, then you're really sweet! :3 How sweet of you to care for a crying lady! :D I have never met someone who is greatly affected by such tears... it's not a weakness, I actually find it to be cute and sweet. :D

Sweet story and you really expressed the characters' feelings well. No one was OOC! Well done! :D

Ja!
MythicalNights chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I loved it, very well written and you managed to keep them in character. I especially like how you dealt with Hinata's character, so many portray her as a stuttering mess. I hope you write more Shika/Hina in the future because you write it very well : )

L8r

MiSS J
idoeshair chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
i would like to comment on the authors confession apirl 24 1992 can you tell me where you where lol?
lovesrainscent chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Ah, tears, the top secret weapon in a kunoichi's arsenal.

I really liked how this played out. You did a good job with all three characters. Hinata remains overcome with her feelings for Naruto. Shikamaru, whether through intentionally surpressing emotions or a blind spot in his own genius manages to overlook the obvious in his hurtful words to Hinata. And Ino stays true to characters - shrill - but ultimately having a better grasp on the situation than Shikamaru.