|Reviews for Twilight Town|
| noone122211214124 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Okay... up now... that was really sad :(
I loved it tho... just... sad :(
| fostofina chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
i love this, plz make another chapie, i'll alert it in case you agree, plz
| Whisky Whisk chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
short, but nice. : )
| The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
This was short, but really, really good.
| Drunken Grad Student chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Although this story is quite short-it's a vignette, really-it's still absorbing and surprisingly rich. The author does an excellent job of conveying a feeling of nostalgic melancholia. There are some clunky bits-a few asides that that interrupt the flow, and a couple of lines that could be trimmed-but that matters little when the author is so good with beautiful imagery ("somewhere between her heart and the tip of her tongue" comes to mind), and the final line is all the more devastating due to how understated it is. On the whole, it's an excellent effort, and well worth the reader's time.