Reviews for Treason
E.Cullen1901 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
i loved this! :D
silfursvik chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
that was an amazing story! and LMAO, i loved that last line! happily ever after for everyone! (except Jessica)
WishIWasABennet chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Hahaha. :D I liked that last line too.

Cute story.
MoniMD chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
fucking jessica! princess my ass! off with her head!
Prayers to Castiel chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
i loved the last line too. and aw! poor Rosalie! and hahaha for Jessica
Minnakoda chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
too cute! The princess and the pea, and a touch of the Ugly Duckling (It's a Swan thing...). Great work
RosyBlondieCullen101 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
That was great, only Jessica would do that. We'll except for Lauren and Tanya.
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
the last line was very funny..and I enjoyed the story
Vampirelover chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Love it! Very wel done! I don't like a lot the princess and the pea but I loved this version!

Good luck!

Signed

Valerie;)
mysticmoon24 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
This story, or i should say one-shot is awesome!
kneon chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I liked your twilighted version of The Princess and the Pea.
TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I agree! I've often thought that Jessica should be beheaded! She's more agreeable that way!
wishimight chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Thanks for entering the contest. I have added your story to the contest community. Please feel free to go to the "writing challenges" forum on twilighted and post a link to your story in the "Once Upon a Twilight" contest thread.

Good luck! :)
Leelan Oleander chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I LOVE your last line, although it would have been even more awesome if Lauren was included in that beheading. ;)

Great story!
katmom chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
LOL...that was GREAT! Well, except for Jessica, who was beheaded...LOL

I'll take a peanut better chocolate chip cookie please...

Good luck!

Kathie
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