Reviews for Silence, Swill and Screams
slaybelle69 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
Great work! I particularly like the Missouri POV. I think you captured John's anguish very well as well as Dean's little-boy direct thoughts. Kids don't filter their thoughts very well, and when you have someone like Missouri listening in, it's bound to be fun. Liked the nod to the 'fangirl' too hahaha. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!
masondixon chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
I have to say I loved the third chapter the best. I loved the fact that Dean realized Missouri could hear his thoughts and yet he still gave her "the evil eye". So Dean, so cute. And I was very glad when Dean was able to find speak at the end. Of course it took him being given a sacred, life-long mission for him to speak- protecting his baby brother. And from that moment on that has been Dean's mission in his life. And he has done a very good job. Thank You for the story.
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