Reviews for Heat
Concerned Reader chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Okay, here's the plan, Imma write some dirty smut, and then censor out the word 'shit', because reasons...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Your potrayal of Hibari is the only thing I dislike, I have no problem with incoherent words but it seemed to me that Hibari's attude is like Gokudera's or Squalo's. Beside that, your story is HOT
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
more pleaseeee... 8018 fic writers seemed to stop writing please write more and keep Hibari as the uke...
Hakuran chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Personally I feel that the uke that you portrayed would be Hayato instead of Hibari.
UuenTheYueRyuu chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Best 8018 ever!
iluvtakeshi96 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Oh God, I actually reached orgasm masturbating to this w

Thanks for writing it xD
Tsuri-Born chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
the very end was adorable
ChocolateMuffin23 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I F****** LOVE THIS. It blew my mind. -nosebleed like a waterfall-

Thanks for the awesome read, and I am very happy with all the detail and description! Thanks again!
ame to kumo chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
seems ooc but sure hot! XD
Pri-ThePuppeteer chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
And the next day Hibari bite Yamamoto but not till the death 'cause the baseball freak was the father of his childrens to come...

What? m-preg! omg!



Just a crazy thought of "what would happen next"

Shimaki-33 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Plz plz plz tell me Hibari wore a colar with a raindrop tag every time they had sex after words! *drool*

XD god bless Giannini!
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Sexy ;D
RussleKun chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
M... yummy. Delicouse... herm... other synomys for the word good.
Mistiel chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
He, that was so yummy! The only problem I had with this story was your censoring of the 'F' word. I don't really see any reason for it. If you can type out the word 'cock', 'fuck' and 'shit' shouldn't be a problem, especially when you've already written out 'asshole'. _~

Other than that, I liked it very much! I always thought a more devious Yama would be very yummy. xDD
Strifekun chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
That was hot. Yum.

But I had a few problems with some of the things in your fic.

You're writing smut; there's no point in censoring swears. Nothing distracts me more than when I'm reading a nice porn-y scene and the next thing I know, bam, censored swear.

Another thing is that I felt Hibari was very out of character. I don't claim to be an expert on his character or anything, but I feel as if Hibari wouldn't swear. I don't think he would have a need to. And it's odd to see him swear in your fic.

Yamamoto isn't as bad, but there are some discrepancies in his character.

Please don't take any of this the wrong way. Your fic is very good and it was a very good read.
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