|Reviews for Legend of Zelda: Beast Within|
| icicle.c.cold chapter 7 . 1/19
Using Spirit as a summons was a nice touch, I'd forgotten that was a Disney movie.
Umm..That WAS a Disney movie, right?
Ah, no matter, plenty of non-Disney stuff in Kingdom Hearts, and FanFics throw off the rules and unleash imagination!
Also, you said you have a pic of Sora's Hyrulean clothes? Where is it? I'd like to have a look at what you drew. Assuming you drew it. I am curious to see if it matches up with what I imagined from your description.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2014
HAH! pride lands.
| lightskiller chapter 4 . 9/7/2014
| Fallen chapter 24 . 2/1/2014
So... about that sequel...
Please? Pretty please?
| dragonmunchies chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
hehe... "shouted quietly" ... that's an oxymoron if i ever saw one.
| dragonmunchies chapter 15 . 10/6/2013
i found the rupee-eating armour to be invaluable during the cave of ordeals which is nice for lots of fairies and fairy tears
| dragonmunchies chapter 13 . 10/6/2013
yeah the fangirls always cracked me up.
did you know if you talk to them they squee and then spout hearts?
i found it absolutely hilarious
| Guest chapter 24 . 4/13/2013
Will you type a sequel pelese.
| That Faggot From Next door chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Gosh, i hope its shonen ai. Its so good
| Love the chapter chapter 10 . 1/8/2013
Sora x Roxas KAWAII XD!
| SilverFlameoftheWindScar chapter 24 . 9/18/2012
Aww... I still hate that ending for Link and Midna. . I mean... In "A Link to the Past", he had the Mirror that transported him to the Dark World, right? Technically, that could've been the Twilight Realm (he DID get transformed into an animal, right?).
Anyways... Absolutely awesome story! There were some grammar errors, but so tiny that I can't name any right off. I'd have to go back through and search for them, lol.
I think, now, I'm going to go and see if your other stories might peak my interest as this one has!
| thrawn92 chapter 16 . 5/11/2012
uh, the "Freezard Warriors are actually called "Chilfos"
| thrawn92 chapter 4 . 11/18/2011
you know, to be honest, I always thought of the portals as blue, or aqua, not green so much
| Crisis chapter 24 . 7/10/2010
A really great story overall, but I do have to say that I don't think the whole Sora/Roxas pairing really worked at all. Leaving aside the fact that I am not a fan of slash or yaoi in the first place, and that since the two are technically the same person it feels alot like narcissism which I don't care for either, the whole thing really didn't flow well with the rest of the story. It felt like you tried to force it rather than actually develop it.
| Ryuus2 chapter 24 . 5/8/2010
This was good.
I really want to think of something more to add, but dinner and The Doctor are calling. Au revoir mon cherri! (I took French in high school and I'm pretty sure I spelled that wrong. Ja Ne!)