|Reviews for A Birthday always holds a secret x|
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
dear the author i think this cha[ter should be about dawn and ash confessing their loveon her birthday
| Me chapter 3 . 8/11/2013
UPDATE PLEASE! you need to update this AND a lot like love(I LOVE THAT STORY) hahaha well pleasssseeeee update :)
| LightRayPearlshipper chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
Have zoey and Kenny try to work together so Zoey can get Ash and Kenny can get Dawn but it always fails. One sided Fireared and Penguinshipping!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Omg it's been three years do you ever finish your stories?
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
its was amazing, but when will chapter 3 and 4 out?
| hiya chapter 3 . 5/21/2011
this is great! please keep writing, i'm looking forward to an update!
| midnightskyxoxo chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
awww... great chapter:)
| Amuto attack chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
maybe you should have ash go too far and pushing dawn to the limit and angering her
| GitahMuttan chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
What the heck?
This an awesome story!
Please very please with please on top.
F*ck it's really good!
UPDATE THIS OR I'LL KILL YOU! Joke! Peace.
Just update when you can
| SatoshiXHikari chapter 3 . 9/23/2010
Too sad for not able to see the chapter 3. I will be waiting for your next release. By the way your story is one of my favorite fanfic stories.
| kami chapter 3 . 5/8/2010
Please write more! This is a great story!
| Kumakko chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
lol that made me laugh lol now onto reading the next chapter
| RandomHelper142 chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Ok, so u need ideas, huh? Well, your story is going great so far: Ash has the ring, and the 'advice'. You want to add Zoey? And Kenny?
Well, maybe, a day before Dawn's birthday, Ash could have the ring in his and Zoey come along, and the five reunite iin the PokèCenter. The ring (in it's box) could fall out from Ash's pocket and Zoey/Kenny/Dawn could find it and confront Ash over it.
Meanwhile, Misty/Ursula/Any random Ashy_fangirl could watch Gary's tape and get jealous. Anyway, what about Pikachu? you could maybe add a little lagomorph fluff into this. (PikachuXBuneary)
I am AshXDawn-PikachuXBuneary, I just cba 2 log in.
| kenia chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
that chapter was so amazing ! Please write the rest of the chapters of this story they are awesome! PLEASE PLEASE write it soon I just can't wait ! I just love all your stories and chapters !
| AshDawninlove chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
Great story so far I think that Kenny and Zoey should fall in love.
p.s. update soon or I will die
p.p.s. I think you shouldn't write so many stories at a time