|Reviews for Intermission|
| Cassy chapter 1 . 6/7
| Gothic Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
| rezmutt chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
this was so adorable. i loved the simplicity of it
| Fuyu chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Thisis very sweet, there are no words to describe how sweet this is, it is also very touching, Keep up the good work
| satomika chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
| Exists In Theory chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Oh the romance!
Now THAT is the kind of way i'd like to return home to like Sagara. Seeing the woman you secretly love after a close call with death, and recieving even the simpliest gestures of affection to feel truly loved!
Bravo! Keep up with the writing!
| SoUsay234 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Aww! This is really cute.
Loved this part:
Surviving battle held so much more meaning now that he had something,
someone, to live for.
Beautiful. Great story.
| gaojo chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
i enjoyed this very much
| C4LYPS0 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
What is it about them you ask?
YOU ALMOST DIDN'T WRITE THIS?
BLASPHEMY! That's not for you to decide!
_;; Well... it is... but still, you shouldn't err- type like that.
This was wonderful, it reminded me of the episode
where Sousuke got his hair cut by Kaname.
Thanks again for writing!
| BlueLion chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Your fic's well done, but I'm afraid it gives a view that's too optimistic and somewhat naive as well ...
Judging from watching the whole FMP-Plot (especially the Second-Raid episodes I see a much darker side in Sousuke's chara.
War - every war changes people - and not for the better either ...
The author Yellow Eyes gave a fitting insight with "It's a job".
| Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
| Kagome778 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i hate one shots T.T wriite more!
| FullmetalShortOne chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I love it :) very cute.
| emmaleexx chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I really loved the simplicity of the whole story. It was simple, fresh and really pretty. Thanks for sharing :)
| Ravensnake chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I was randomly looking around for something to read, and I never really put much faith in one-shots, but I took a stab in the dark with this one and really liked it :). Great story.