Reviews for Intermission
Cassy chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
Great job.
Gothic Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
So sweet
rezmutt chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
this was so adorable. i loved the simplicity of it
Fuyu chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Thisis very sweet, there are no words to describe how sweet this is, it is also very touching, Keep up the good work
satomika chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Exists In Theory chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Oh the romance!

Now THAT is the kind of way i'd like to return home to like Sagara. Seeing the woman you secretly love after a close call with death, and recieving even the simpliest gestures of affection to feel truly loved!

Bravo! Keep up with the writing!
SoUsay234 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Aww! This is really cute.

Loved this part:

Surviving battle held so much more meaning now that he had something,

someone, to live for.

Beautiful. Great story.
gaojo chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
i enjoyed this very much
C4LYPS0 chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
What is it about them you ask?


BLASPHEMY! That's not for you to decide!

_;; Well... it is... but still, you shouldn't err- type like that.

This was wonderful, it reminded me of the episode

where Sousuke got his hair cut by Kaname.

Thanks again for writing!

BlueLion chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Your fic's well done, but I'm afraid it gives a view that's too optimistic and somewhat naive as well ...

Judging from watching the whole FMP-Plot (especially the Second-Raid episodes I see a much darker side in Sousuke's chara.

War - every war changes people - and not for the better either ...

The author Yellow Eyes gave a fitting insight with "It's a job".
Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Kagome778 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i hate one shots T.T wriite more!
FullmetalShortOne chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I love it :) very cute.
emmaleexx chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I really loved the simplicity of the whole story. It was simple, fresh and really pretty. Thanks for sharing :)
Ravensnake chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I was randomly looking around for something to read, and I never really put much faith in one-shots, but I took a stab in the dark with this one and really liked it :). Great story.
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