|Reviews for 6,581 Miles to Luma|
| Himitsu Miko chapter 13 . 6/18/2011
Oh my god, it lives! You live! I love you! you made my day by updating!
D'awww, poor Riku. But we all make mistakes, I guess. And he didn't know-though that probably made it worse. IT was cool to see him go from complete submission to killing those guards effortlessly.
And now we know why Riku belongs to Sora and obeys his every command. They're cute, if dysfunctional.
| Pinuiini chapter 13 . 6/18/2011
oh my god! You totally made my day :3
| Keuraki-SoraXRiku chapter 13 . 6/18/2011
I think i spent around five months waiting desperately for the next chapter of Luma, thinking that the frequent updates beforehand had, you know, signified a constant stream of muse via you for it, but after that expanse of time it just seemed a little bit draining to be constantly waiting for Luma to continue.
I'm so glad you've updated D:
It excited me when i read the first sentence and realised that this chapter would be centered around Riku :) Though a lot of my questions haven't been answered (note: what EXACTLY is a Replica? How are they created?) one main "cornern" of mine has been; how Sora and Riku met. I think this is one of my favourite chapters from you, given that i have this iconic THING for cells (and, furthermore, making out in them), and i'm glad it's not a cliche meeting in a cell kind of situation, like a lot of people overuse - i'm even glad i don't know exactly WHY Riku is in there in the first place. I have a few ideas wafting around in my head, but i'm not impatient to answer them - i can wait another year :) BUT DON'T MAKE ME WAIT. LIKE SERIOUSLY.
My avourite part to this would have to be the section where Sora starts re-visiting Riku, the confusion he goes through and the ideas he crosses off in his head about what's happening, and why it's happening to him, of all people. My heart was racing during that part and i don't know if it was because of my insessant love for morbidity (or, in this case, the illusion of it), but something else connected to me during that part, and i don't think i'll ever forget that.
Now you make sure you update a little faster, missy, or i'll be forced to remind you myself.
ALL THE TIME.
Thank you for updating with such an amazing chapter, darling!
| owlpostagain chapter 13 . 6/17/2011
sequence of events:
1. "is that a...a...no way, am I reading this email right?"
2. happy dance around kitchen that makes me revert back to a six-year-old in both behavior and speech pattern
3. realization that I have an audience of no less than four people.
4. quietly slink off to bedroom to read in absolute silence.
this story fascinates more or less every tendril of thought I can grasp at. I don't care if it takes you ten years to finish it, I'll read it through to the end.
| Reptalizer chapter 13 . 6/17/2011
Thank you for updating! It was awesome (and sad and cute), but specially awesome.
Keep up with your awesome(r) work _
| boysgotwoe chapter 12 . 5/21/2011
Alright, so I just finished reading 'Boys', I have to admit I was a little wary at first, I wasn't a Riku/Sora fan per say. I mean I liked them and loved them as a side pairing but never actually read a story revolving around them. I'm an AkuRoku fan, through and through, lol. I read 'Boys' because I saw that Roxas was a main part of it and in short, it awed me. You know that ache in your chest you get after reading a really, really good story? I have that right now. Your writing style is fabulous, in a way I only wish I could write. You blend the humor and seriousness so well and you left it on a happy note, which in my opinion is the single best thing an author can do,lol. Though, I'm not writing this to praise you on that story, I was wondering if you were planning to continue with this story? I don't like to make it a habbit to read abandoned fics just because I sit there craving to know what the author had in mind, how they wanted to end it, what other moments they wanted to add. I understand if it's become something you can no longer write, but I'd really appreciate the heads up as to whether you plan to finish it! :)
| naming the world chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
I think this chapter did a great job of establishing the personalities of each of the new characters introduced. Things are really starting to get interesting!
| naming the world chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
Ah, so new characters are finally being introduced! I was wondering when this would happen. I don't know if Kairi and Roxas could have stood each other much longer without some other human interaction. xD So exciting!
| naming the world chapter 3 . 5/8/2011
So Kairi's slowly beginning to regain her memories. You're doing a great job of transitioning and detailing the process.
| naming the world chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
I'm very impressed by how thoroughly you described Kairi's condition at the beginning of the chapter and the effects it had on her both physically and mentally throughout the rest of the read. I'm sensing that something exciting will be coming up soon!
| naming the world chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
The plot seems very promising. It's obvious that you've taken numerous characters from the Kingdom Hearts universe and placed them in your own, unique storyline. I look forward to reading more!
| AZ965 chapter 12 . 4/7/2011
You haven't worked on this in a while, but I finally got around to reading the whole thing and it was really interesting. I like the world you've created for this fic, the plots great and Roxas and all his secrets; I want to know what happens. D: If you're still working on it I really hope you can find time to post more soon!
| andthenshesaid chapter 12 . 2/14/2011
... This isn't like, abandoned or anything, right? I mean 7 months isn't that long - in like the long term world view or something.
But, I mean. This is pretty adorable/awesome/kickass/bestthingever.
Cos Roxas's little "humor" stuff. Itissogreat. Seriously.
| owlpostagain chapter 12 . 12/16/2010
well...crap. I've been staring at this for months, stalling and stalling and telling myself I was going to wait it out, wait to see if you'd be writing any more soon or if it was abandoned...and I finally caved, and of course (no surprise, I fucking love naivety and boys so why should this be any different), it's FANTASTIC. fantastic, fantastical, ridiculous, entrancing, incredible, I totally understand the college thing (honors thesis eating my soul), but I really hope you find some inspiration to write more soon.
| Kioko Yasu chapter 12 . 10/22/2010
i hopeyour still working on this! I really like it so far! it has a completly different feel than Boys which makes me hail your writing skills all the wait for the next chapter!