|Reviews for The Lost Son|
| xXChirushiXx chapter 7 . 3/12/2013
UPDATE! Update update UPDATE! And don't u dare ditch this story, even if its not the best written one I've read but I have curtain lay seen much worse(I don't usually pick up mistake if a plot id really and I haven't found any in here so far). This has a really good story line and u must go on! So... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
| MasterYaoiCollector chapter 7 . 10/6/2012
please add more to this soon i would love to know what happens next thanks!
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| yukinari chapter 7 . 2/8/2012
| savviii-darkside chapter 7 . 1/22/2012
this is an awesome story, and is a really good idea :)
please update soon and maybe slow down a bit and give more info, but i hope you come back to this cause have really enjoyed reading it and want to find out what happens next a.s.a.p
| clizasanimeluver98 chapter 7 . 1/7/2012
wah... this is getting nice eh...pls. update soon
| Sealing Mistress chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 3 . 6/28/2011
His outfit was good.
Your dialogue seems...lame.
Forbidden Scroll scene. Eh.
Too many random coincidences without the entertainment. Not cool.
Overall, severely lacking. Great idea, and I can still muscle my way through reading it, but it just has little appeal.
Like when you watch a movie. Do you want to watch an okay, or do you want to watch one that has you on the edge of your seat, has you so involved in the story that you feel every emotion. Do you want that serious 'WOW!' factor.
My advice, work a little more on your writing. Maybe get someone else to read over what you write and ask them their opinion. A Beta reader.
Anyways, not bad so far.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
Oh come on! Ultimate random occurrence to end up with the same name? Lame. Couldn't you give him a different one? (sigh)
Other than that, not bad so far.
| DangoDaikazaku chapter 7 . 4/13/2011
AWWwww! why there has not been any updates? I wanna update soon!
| Akiri chapter 7 . 3/4/2011
Wow. Great story. I'm glad that Naruto finally got he family he deserved. Please update when you can. Keep up the great work.
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 7 . 2/21/2011
It's a good idea, though I think this fic it's a bit too rushed... everything happens so fast that nothing really stays...
Even so, I like the idea, and since I was reading your latest fic, I can say that your style got better, I hope you're willing to take this story and make it amazing.
Thank you for the story!
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
It's so obvious that a lost baby, if not in the hospital, it's going to be in the orphanage, that I can't believe that Minato (nor I) didn't think of searching there... I won an epic facepalm there...
| Karishiana chapter 7 . 10/17/2010
This is awesome! I love this story so much! Please, please update soon! I'm begging you! It's such a good story!
Good luck on the future chapters, and please update soon!
| summerrblondae chapter 7 . 8/18/2010
i really enjoy this story so far but if you are gonna write the bell test i hope i wont be exactly like it is in the anime/manga it would be cool to see naruto look not like a total idiot though you could make sasuke look like one (never liked him) :)
| TS001 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
On to the next!