Reviews for Beautiful Sinner
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
Update, please!
Busumeushi chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
I want more!
Seraphina Dragon chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
hope to read more
glykeria chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
please update the story is really good!
woodlandfairykirk chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
really realistic(: good job!
Yanirca chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
I LOVE IT KEEP GOING !.
anlmoon chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
I like this awesome. please update soon
BadxGood chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
u r really good at writing. I just love Hinata with the bad guys.
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
*gasp*Nooooooo! wat happens next? T.T Plz keep me updated.
yukeh chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
update it please?
LightsBright chapter 3 . 4/27/2011
Awww so sweet! Please update soon! Everyone seems so in character!
Naan chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
The characters are a bit weak in the beginning. If thee wre a way to depict the different forms of the character earlier in the chapter then it would be easier to imagine. I could not visualize the bird, flight, or red wolf until much later the I would have hoped.

Its good emotional descriptions but not so good colors and textures. The audience must see the characters in their minds. Overall, not bad.
bluemaniac chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
continue please!
The-handprint-onthe-window chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
AWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEE SSSOOOOO CUTTEEEEE!
Rosie Thornet chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
This is really good, It's like a book... you should make more people hit on her to make Sasori jelous! Nice job
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