Reviews for Naruto and the Guardians
SageModeSasuke chapter 30 . 12/17/2015
cruel, but not totally unexpected ending.
SageModeSasuke chapter 29 . 12/17/2015
Super happy with this chapter. Well done.
SageModeSasuke chapter 28 . 12/17/2015
Hay Lin is awesome!
SageModeSasuke chapter 27 . 12/17/2015
Okay... it's 3:30 am. I should be asleep, but 'I must keep reading...'
SageModeSasuke chapter 26 . 12/16/2015
A nice little plot twist.
SageModeSasuke chapter 24 . 12/16/2015
SageModeSasuke chapter 23 . 12/16/2015
Finally... confronting Tsunade!
SageModeSasuke chapter 22 . 12/16/2015
SageModeSasuke chapter 17 . 12/15/2015
Holy crazy crap fest. Nerissa is part of the Akatsuki!
SageModeSasuke chapter 14 . 12/15/2015
You made the concern of Will and Hay Lin's friends, and boyfriends feel real. That's hard to do. Well done.
SageModeSasuke chapter 13 . 12/15/2015
This was a great chapter!
SageModeSasuke chapter 12 . 12/15/2015
Okay, I sort of understand where you are coming from now in your writing at the time. You are/were a young writer and it shined through in your topics and the way you wrote. It's not bad, just needs a touch of refinement. I am a bit older and my stuff still has a lot of issues I am trying to learn to fix, including remembering to fix grammar errors before posting.
SageModeSasuke chapter 3 . 12/14/2015
...The guys and the girls seemed to get super hurt feelings too easily to me. I am still reading the story as it has a lot of potential, but I guess I can only wait and see where the story goes from here.
SageModeSasuke chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
Interesting... but good.
SageModeSasuke chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
Awesome start. If you haven't read W.I.T.C.H comic, it's different than the show and goes WAY further. It ended recently. check out witch-o-holic .tk (that last part was 'dot tk' in case it disappeared for some reason). Loved the comic/Disney's italian manga.
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