Reviews for ALIVE
AstridThore7 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Chosen Dark Angel1 - I like your initiative to change to the use of fanfiction to poetry. I feel that you have started on a great beginning. I was wondering if you would be thinking of juxaposing you initial definition of ALIVE with the communities definition or possibly a envious direction to the nature around him as nature dies and comes back to life with the seasons. Overall, I really like your choice of verbs. Though I would like you to expand with more descriptions - having the poem speak instead of the verbs - can you show what it is to be ALIVE. Great job! Keep it up :0)
YaoiFreak4Life chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
That was beautiful. Very short but perfect for the story :)
MilkIsAGoodSourceOfCalcium chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
OMg thats actaully simple but so affective, your like the ONLY person on fanfic that has written ANYTHING for generation dead, and it such a good book. This is really nice!..x
TerraTakaya chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
love the poem, please write more!
TayliaNinja chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Very well written :)