Reviews for Hands On Me
Alexa Brooks chapter 20 . 9/18/2016
OMG can you PLEASE hurry up posting the next chapter? I'm DYING to know what happens next! The problems is really good!
Alexa Brooks chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
Sorry I haven't reviewed for the past few chapters. It's just that it's so interesting, I didn't want to spend any time for reviewing. Wow . . . I wonder what will happen next!
Alexa Brooks chapter 8 . 9/18/2016
Ha Ha Ha ... that was funny! The Ever in this book is so devious in a good way!
Alexa Brooks chapter 7 . 9/18/2016
You don't have to tell ME to review . . . because I always will! Wow . . . I don't know how to say this . . .
So amazing, touching, and nice!
Alexa Brooks chapter 6 . 9/18/2016
I didn't know about Zinfandel until I read this! That is so cool!
Alexa Brooks chapter 5 . 9/18/2016
You are an AMAZING Fanfiction writer! And thanks for making a Fanfiction of the Immortals . . . there's only a few good ones of those!
Alexa Brooks chapter 2 . 9/18/2016
Wow . . . that's really good so far! Keep up the good work!
Alexa Brooks chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
WOW. That's quite the cliffhanger you got there! You ended Chapter 1 perfectly . . . Love it so far!
Guest chapter 20 . 3/15/2016
Amazing!
MaGgIeIsAsTaR chapter 20 . 7/30/2010
And Love Scandals! *gasp* LOL

I love this! Update! Please?
MaGgIeIsAsTaR chapter 19 . 6/27/2010
Hey! I was to lazy to log in..

This is awesome! I have a few ingredients!

"Hair of A fiery Griffin, who's love is passionate and true"

But, the catch is, Griffin means someone who was evil, and Damen was evil, and his love is true, so Ever has to get a piece of Damen's hair!

I know, I know, I have a very active imagination... But, it's a good idea! You don't have to use it though, it's up to you!

Update! :)
Anon x chapter 7 . 4/15/2010
These are great! I can tell youve put a lot of time and effort into this story, 17 Chapters! Woahh! Well done :)
cnt spel and idc chapter 4 . 4/3/2010
You're dialouge is a bit stiff. Maybe if you loosened it up a bit, the story would seem more realistic and less choppy. Does that make sense? other than that i think it's a really good plot so far
MaGgIeIsAsTaR chapter 16 . 3/14/2010
i LUV this series! Keep writing!
MaGgIeIsAsTaR chapter 15 . 3/3/2010
luv this story!
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