Wow, what an amazing story! You've captured so well Alice and Jasper's personalities and made such a believable plot!
Truly truly beautiful!
I loved how protective Jasper is and how their connection is so pure and deep...
I hope you write more about them it would be fantastic!
Congrats!

Team bella all the May airways forever i like both edward and jacob and believed that both were importment to bella personally i thought it was obivious but to the point i was exicited to read alice's pov wasn't disappoint wish had 6
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In not sure if you even check these anymore. I just wanted to say thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it :)

I love your style of writing; you do a great job writing from Alice's POV, keep going! :)

JASPER AND ALICEEEEEE

This is so exciting!

I am crying so hard. New Moon, has always made me cry, everytime.

Binge reading this for hours! Thank you for writing this! You really did an amazing job. Alice is my fav in twilight, you write her so in tune and meticulousely spot on with the canon! I love to read more of your writing of Alice's story in eclipse or BD... or even off book post BD or before twilight hehe

I hope you see this. I know I'm late to the party. But wow, was that full of emotion. This fic is definitely one of my favorites. Thank you for doing such an amazing job! You're a very talented writer!

Absolutely stunning portrayal of the family's argument. Exactly how I imagined it playing out, and better. Fantastic descriptions, perfect emotions, and the way you pictured each character was immaculate. Just spot on.

This is great! It’s so sad though, which so good so keep it up, I couldn’t control some of the tears flowing. They just had to come down !

Aaahhh~ I know it's been almost a decade since you've finished this but I only just found it. And I'm so glad I did! You've done such a wonderful job! I'm sure you'll probably never read this because it has been so long, but I just have to tell you anyway~ I think you've captured all of them perfectly! I don't think I could have asked for a better read or such a glimpse into Alice's mind, even from Meyer herself! This feels like it could be seamlessly included in her series, though it is very clearly yours and your writing style. I especially love how you depicted Alice falling into some of her visions, particularly the ones she isn't looking/prepared for. How certain words of those around her (or thoughts of her own) start to drop her into them; blurring present and future for a moment of disorientation. It was an amazing visual and gave me a great sense of foreboding/unease/slight discomfort that I can (now) imagine Alice experiences. I can't help but picture that scene from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, just after Fred and George completely disrupt everyone's exams with fireworks in the halls, where amidst everyone cheering and having a good time, Harry's reality is melting around him until he sees that vision of Sirius being tortured by Voldemort. Absolutely awesome! I do very much feel like you really /got/ her. Truly, well done; an absolutely fantastic job! A million thanks for sharing this with us!

Tbh, Alice is badass for going against everyone to search for Bella. She's truly a loyal, concerned friend.

I know it's 2019 and this was posted years ago, but if you're still out there: this was wonderful! It was beautifully written, the Alice/Jasper moments were perfect! Exceptional writing!

Amazing