Reviews for On The Job
Jazzola chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
That ending cracked me up- loved it!

Seriously, you're probably the best smut writer in this category. Adored it.

Jazzola :)
Ziggy Stardust chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Oh my god, that was soo funny! I love Chris' final line, classic... Poor Ray, though he does deserve it really :p
MissLP chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This is amazing! You characterise everybody down to a tee and, to be quite frank, you made this scene SO hot. I mean it, phew. I love the fact that you add so much humour to your writing, I loved the bit with Ray; I cracked up laughing so much! I really hope you write more and more because this and all your other stories are fandabbydozy. x
DCIPHOENIX chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
well that was *gets up off the floor* whooo! amazing! xx
Harri83 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
too...damn...hot...THAT was just delicious and they should TOTALLY do it on the show sounds about the right length for an 8 minute goodbye! ;)
x-Bedazzled-x chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
The bouncy castle image was great and the ending hysterical! My only qualm was that it did end there!
NelleEsor chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I'm actually laughing my head off - well done

-Nell
Doctor Addison Montgomery chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Ha, I loved it! :) A perfect mixture of hot and funny. You captured all the characters perfectly!

~Col. Sam Carter x
ViennaSunset chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Hahahahaah very funny and sexy! Fizzy knickers had me in stitches though, I dunno why!

Hot

Hot

Hot :)
scribblechacha chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
! dirty smut, dirty, dirty, dirty! YAY! loved the reactions and the smut of course XD
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I am amazed by the two different sides of your fic persona - one, that can write sizzling hot smut like this and one that can write something as sensitive and emotionally complex as "The Art of Living". May both continue to flourish! Chris's inncent intrusion, Ray's horror, Gene's discovery of the busted lock, and Chris's final line are all hysterical.
BollyHunt chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
oh my god! bloody funny as hell and hot to ! great story love it !
Siggy chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Fantasically smutty as always and I loved Chris and Ray's reactions. Priceless.
Golden Suze chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I love this fanfic. It was naughty and funny. aww bless Ray
Whisper Through Leaves chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Dirty dirty dirty...and loved it ;)
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