|Reviews for In Stereo|
| gossip-bangkok chapter 3 . 8/18/2009
Amazing story so far
looking forward to the next chapter XD
| Naomitron chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
I honestly feel bad for Bella. Even though her social life might seem a bit more...active than most people would like for a woman doesn't mean she doesn't deserve the right to pursue something real when she thinks she's found it. I know you said her past with continue to haunt these two for a little while longer, but I hope it isn't TOO painful.
Your AN at the end of the chapter definitely piqued my curiosity. I wonder what is the nature of the beast/industry in which Bella and Alice choose to work in.
| azure0610 chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
It's also important to note what industry she works in and who is her best friend. Sometimes things don't always appear as they seem...
So YET again in a story Alice has been running her damm mouth at the wrong time. People love Alice...I do at times but other times she just goes too far and doesn't think. In addition to be selfish and it being all about her but still.
Either Alice isn't really a true friend or Bella is doing some lying and hiding. I wouldn't be surprised if it's the latter. It's not like it's a stretch for Bella anyways.
Okay when you said she works for a production company, as far as LA and Hollywood goes when I hear "production company" I'm thinking movies or TV. Nothing said "fashion" to me. Yet she describes her job like something out of The Devil Wears Prada. Which explains how she has such expensive clothes, the big ass closet with clothes to borrow.
Okay I somewhat agree that Bella isn't a bad girl. But honestly I could care less if she fucked a quarter of the male population in LA under the age of 30. And with her I like sex a lot attitude, she's probably a few years from achieving that goal. But STILL...she SHOULD have told Edward who she was.
She knew it was his party. Everyone in that place knew it was Edward Cullen's party. Edward definitely didn't know she was Emmett's ex. That was WRONG on all levels.
So she doesn't get to play the "I live life on my terms" "I am woman" "I'm feisty and strong" "I'm bitchy when I want to be" cards. She should have said flat out "you're right I SHOULD have mentioned I was Emmett's ex and I was WRONG" admit it say "I was wrong and I'm sorry"
Sure she said she was sorry but AFTER her bitch rant. The first words out of her trap should have been an apology. She has NO right to get bitchy. She didn't need to justify her lifestyle...she should have righted her wrong then if she wanted to mention why she "infamous" in the scene then so be it.
Usually in a story if I dislike Bella isn't because of some whiny/annoying/over analyzing personality trait. But this Bella, I don't like her character at all.
Sure I'll be happy when they get together and ride off into the sunset but I'll always dislike her. I could have liked her but she turned on the bitchy and threw any chance of me liking her and redeeming herself to me out the window.
| Rochelle Allison chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
damn, very hot stairs/couch scene. ;)
i like and respect that bella was the one to initiate both the conversation about emmett and the one at the end in bed.
"sexually liberated" can be, to me, a rather loaded term and somewhat ambiguous. i wouldn't call her slutty at all, but at this point we really know very little about her, don't we? (all part of the intrigue...) :)
that said, she might be trying to fight hollywood's double standard and do her own thing, but i also felt that she was preemptively defensive with edward. he seems to be a bit of a gentle soul; not a push over, but kind of chill. she seemed ready to confront him b/c she felt guilty...not necessarily b/c he was accusing her of anything, you know? i guess i just found it ironic that she admits to really liking sex, but got worried when the guy she likes was ready to have it (with her).
loved the chapter, though. seriously. it's got me hooked.
| klcivinski chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
love it...cannot wait for more.
| creampuffsteph chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
i really do love all the interaction between edward, jasper, seth, etc. they make me laugh a lot.
and bella...well i'm glad they got to some talking. but based on what she said and didnt say, you know there is more. obviously like how she said edward was different from the rest. kinda a hint that edward's remarks about her being seen on the arm of celebs in gossip rags weren't far from the truth. i know she's not bad, but she's misguided. and so clearly her and e have their work cut out for them
still, like he said, she keeps him on his toes and he's very sexy and hot so i mean, i'm sure he can exorcise the demon inside of her. lol and we all know just how that iwll happen *wink wink*
bahaha srsly tho, great chapter. can'twait to read what happens next
| Ironic Twist chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
I'm having trouble believing anything Bella says. At first I wondered if she worked in the porn industry, but your description in the summary, "World famous... opportunist?" makes me wonder if everything she says is simply a lie.
Your AN doesn't help - "It's also important to note what industry she works in and who is her best friend. Sometimes things don't always appear as they seem..."
You make note of her expensive jewelry and handbags. I'm very curious to find out who Bella Swan really is.
| Hope4more chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
I am loving your Bella. The girl admits freely who she is and has no apologies for it. Take that, I say!
Edward is falling, and has his reservations, but I think on some level she is refreshing.
Way to show the double standard, when will that ever end?
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| lovedwardalways chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Seth is so funny, the threesome stuff and then the save the boobies. Bella can really stand up for herself and make some really be a little sex kitten when need be. Awesome chapter.
| LovesTwilightFanFics83 chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
wow loving this chapter and not just for the lemon...bella just pouring her heart out was amazing hope that you update soon!
| vanessarae chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Ok, while it doesn't sound like Bella is a man-eater, things are def 'off' a bit. I'm quite interested to learn more about her.
| darcy13 chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Fighting the double standard-that's intriguing. It's also something that's existed in one fashion or another for centuries. Your story is really interesting.
| pippapear chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
hiya! :) hmmh Bella is still pretty much of an enigma isn't she? ? Very interesting. . What ed is seeing is that what he thinks? Very intriguing. Still def more than meets the eye to Bella. . I like how she has depths to her personality &her motivations. . I also like how Edward is obv confused. She's churning up his world. .
I like how this story is quite different to what else is out there at the mo. . As always your writing is exemplary. I lv it. Thanks babe. :) hope you're ok. Lotsa lv. Emmy. X x x
| Jeni K chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
WOW way to go Bella for standing up in what she believes in and what she feels is right. Im glad that Edward isnt just going to send her away cause of her past. Cant wait to see how their special relationship unfolds.