|Reviews for Kaleidoscope|
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/1
I'm Irish and I have never heard of pinching someone who doesn't wear green on St Patrick's Day. We don't worry what colour what colour people wear and we don't eat corned beef. The Irish poor couldn't afford any form of beef.
| Loads of Randomness chapter 10 . 8/5/2013
great ending, wish there were more colours )
Favourite line: "Grey is a compromise, between the two extremes of black and white. Because to become white, he might have to forgive her—and he doesn't think he ever can. And to become black, she'd have to stop regretting what she did, and stop loving him—and she knows she never will." you NEARLY made me cry
| Loads of Randomness chapter 8 . 8/5/2013
Whoa. Deep. Brilliant work
Favourite line: "Jenny Shepard didn't love purple, she relished it. She reigned over it and coveted it. It was strange that she wouldn't describe it as her favorite colour (no; that was blue, for reasons that should remain known to her alone) yet she craved it, collected it, and wanted it." of course we don't know why she loves blue coughGibbscough
I love Cleopatra as well
| Loads of Randomness chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
Snorts this was funny and sweet and sexy. How the heck do you manage that?
Favourite line: "Likening innocence to her fair skin is a mockery of the very definition of the word." funny
| Loads of Randomness chapter 6 . 8/5/2013
Loved it, duh
Favourite line: "Trust me, forget-me-not blue.
That was the umbrella term she used to describe his eyes; the definitive denotation that popped into her head immediately when she looked into his eyes, and the very first way his eyes made her feel, even before she fell in love with him." because its sweet
| Loads of Randomness chapter 5 . 8/5/2013
Green's my favourite colour. I love all the descriptions for the different shades of green
Couldn't pick a favourite line
| Loads of Randomness chapter 4 . 8/5/2013
This was a very cute chapter
"He likes that softness in her, the part of her that makes her kind and caring for other people, the loving nature that is brought out by pink." awwws
| Loads of Randomness chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
This was so sweet
Favourite line: "Yellow made her smile." always a nice thing
| Loads of Randomness chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Favourite line: "Red was the color of the lipstick left on his mouth and neck after she came undone, red were her swollen, sore lips as he shuddered against her and she bit them to quiet her screams; red was her nose and her pretty cheeks at the shameful indignity and unspeakable thrill of being fucked by her former partner in the forensics lab. Red was all he saw when he buried himself in her and listened to her ragged breathing and the pulsing of her heart and inhaled the spicy scent of her messy and ruined red curls." wow
| Loads of Randomness chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
This is so cool!
Favourite line: "Jenny took a deep breath and let the orange blossoms fill her senses until she was light-headed and dizzy.
Or maybe that was from the sex." I think its the sex
| Viktorija chapter 10 . 1/3/2011
I loved it! Thank you for this journey! :)
| MissJayne chapter 10 . 1/2/2011
Loved it! Beautiful. I'm going to miss this series...
| Hairbrush chapter 10 . 1/2/2011
Absolutely AMAZING(: i loved it!
*101st review* *does a little dance*
| GeekLoveFan chapter 10 . 1/1/2011
A perfect conclusion. It's like the bitter note in a song that doesn't quite resolve... Very Jen and Gibbs. Lovely as always.
You are magnificent, my love. :)
| Mrs. Elizabeth Gibbs chapter 10 . 1/1/2011
I am very sad to see the colors end. I quite liked them :) I loved how you worked grey; you made it define their relationship perfectly. The last line was quite good. Definitely an excellent way to end this little collection. I've loved it! xx