Reviews for 5 Times James Kirk Almost Died And One He Didn't
Anna chapter 2 . 9/12/2019
This is beautiful. I read this a little while ago and didn’t comment (I don’t like commenting often), but then I started reading “Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close” and the main character lives his entire life like “Stop. Go back.” This chapter was all I could think of, reading it. Just felt like I needed to tell you how spectacularly you did this, so well that it fit right into another character and another story. Keep writing, you’re wonderful! Have a lovely day!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
A very good story more!
geotic chapter 6 . 8/25/2019
Good story and interesting insight into Jim's mind!
fightboredom chapter 3 . 6/4/2019
acolytes not accolades. I've only seen a couple episodes of TOS but the "captain gets hurt/kidnapped/arrested etc" trope is alive and well in Star Trek: Enterprise with Captain Archer.
fightboredom chapter 1 . 6/4/2019
Good story but I noticed 2 minor typos.

I've seen gentility misused in fanfiction several times recently as if it means gentleness but it has nothing to do with that. It is the noun form of genteelsocial superiority as demonstrated by genteel manners, behavior, or appearances."

Not as big an issue is using insure instead of ensure. You insure your car, you ensure that something happens.
uillceal chapter 1 . 4/4/2019
Not much for the techno babble of Trek, but the characters and their emotional [or non-emotional] reactions are true to the spirit of TOS. Well done.
vulcan chapter 1 . 3/20/2019
can'not think of anythink to sat right now
vulcan chapter 6 . 12/16/2018
when you write stories can you tell me why you start it five times james did this or spock did this and one they didn't
vulcan chapter 5 . 12/13/2018
if jim kirk is in bed i think i will be with him i'm dropping to sleep
vulcan chapter 4 . 12/13/2018
why is it that some times i read that spock can't swim and others he can nd why don't you writers just put an end to it and kill both kirk and spock and bury them you are alway's trying to kill one or the other or maybe kirk is one of those that wont stay dead
vulcan chapter 3 . 12/13/2018
do you copy some other's stories as i thing that i have read this part in an other story where captain gets kidnapped and tyed to a table be to be killed for their god
vulcan chapter 2 . 12/13/2018
can't white to read what happen's next like why don't kirk ask why is spock on or in bed with his captain
vulcan chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
how good a read that was i hope it's like a book that you can't put down . it's so good i hope that it will get better or i will skip some chapters l'l'a'p
Bethan chapter 2 . 7/15/2018
I absolutely love the ‘Stop. Go Back.’ Part of the story. Wish there was a separate story on that:)
Guest chapter 6 . 5/14/2018
So anyway I spent ten hours digging through every Star Trek fic on this godforsaken site just to find this one and it was and is worth every minute.
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