Reviews for 5 Times James Kirk Almost Died And One He Didn't |
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![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Wonderful fic! I love your writing. Each chapter was great, and the last one was a fitting conclusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do love Kirk when he has no regard for his own life. I love how protective the rest of the crew are. Very enjoyable thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great story. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() This is beautiful. I read this a little while ago and didn’t comment (I don’t like commenting often), but then I started reading “Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close” and the main character lives his entire life like “Stop. Go back.” This chapter was all I could think of, reading it. Just felt like I needed to tell you how spectacularly you did this, so well that it fit right into another character and another story. Keep writing, you’re wonderful! Have a lovely day! |
![]() ![]() A very good story more! |
![]() ![]() Good story and interesting insight into Jim's mind! |
![]() ![]() ![]() acolytes not accolades. I've only seen a couple episodes of TOS but the "captain gets hurt/kidnapped/arrested etc" trope is alive and well in Star Trek: Enterprise with Captain Archer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story but I noticed 2 minor typos. I've seen gentility misused in fanfiction several times recently as if it means gentleness but it has nothing to do with that. It is the noun form of genteelsocial superiority as demonstrated by genteel manners, behavior, or appearances." Not as big an issue is using insure instead of ensure. You insure your car, you ensure that something happens. |
![]() ![]() Not much for the techno babble of Trek, but the characters and their emotional [or non-emotional] reactions are true to the spirit of TOS. Well done. |
![]() ![]() can'not think of anythink to sat right now |
![]() ![]() when you write stories can you tell me why you start it five times james did this or spock did this and one they didn't |
![]() ![]() if jim kirk is in bed i think i will be with him i'm dropping to sleep |
![]() ![]() why is it that some times i read that spock can't swim and others he can nd why don't you writers just put an end to it and kill both kirk and spock and bury them you are alway's trying to kill one or the other or maybe kirk is one of those that wont stay dead |