|Reviews for 5 Times James Kirk Almost Died And One He Didn't|
| pappy yokum's moonbeam chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
"If I cannot change the outcome, let me change the world." That brilliant line is so perfect I can't even begin to say. Loved this chapter. Everyone was very much in character, and the angst and hurt/comfort was balanced very well. Wasn't depressing, but wasn't something that ended on a super happy note either, and those can be annoying in that they seem to downplay the gravity of the prior situation. Wasn't overdone in explanation or emotion, but not underdone in either aspect, and there were no detectable grammatical errors, which is an added bonus. Loved it.
| wotumba1 chapter 6 . 7/19/2013
that will be hard work for spock, very hard work...
| wotumba1 chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
so not even endangering spock makes him more careful...
| wotumba1 chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
LOL love the idea of the locator, that's exactly what he needs!
| wotumba1 chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
poor jim! being haunted by those thoughts for all of his life!
| wotumba1 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
they certainly have the right to be nervous about that!
| alliekiwi chapter 6 . 7/15/2013
I loved your characterisation. Well written!
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/15/2013
absolutely f*****g fantastic
| roxashasboxers chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
Oh, I just loved this. All the little insights into Jim's mind, and of course the ridiculousness that follows him around. Poor Bones - if only they'd let him stay in the bathroom on that first flight. ;)
| roxashasboxers chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
Oh, I would love to see the rest of that list haha And Sulu is just killing me here!
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
Lolz the LIST..It does seem like something that Kirk needs. I love your story
| Brown hair and eyes chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
Wow. I love it! An awesome piece.
| not-exactly-the-truth chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
After reading this entire work, I have to say that this one is my favorite by far. I absolutely love it, especially Spock's "horrified awe" at Kirk's constant attempt at defeating the only Kobayashi Maru that ever mattered in his life. The bit with him being young and going through that already really got to me. Wonderful, all of it, but mostly this one!
| katX0 chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
I reread this ever now and again... it always makes my day :] Super story!
| kyuubecky chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
NICE! Oh Jim! I can just see the crew's faces when they opened the doors to see that scene!