Reviews for Inamorata
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 8 . 8/5/2009
There is a real growth in this poem from unsure to connected.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 9 . 8/5/2009
Soothing balm

To heal

A shattered heart

That was really beautiful
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 10 . 8/5/2009
This one read as quite emotional to be. Almost a tragedy. I liked this line the most

A scream of sirens
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 7 . 8/2/2009
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 6 . 8/2/2009
That he had built

His faith, his life

His love

Upon the sand

That’s when

He finally


Where the sand


Been leading him

All these years…

Completely beautiful!
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 5 . 8/2/2009
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 4 . 8/2/2009
The end of the pain was chilling.

This was my favorite past


Children are


But so are you

Solitary destiny

Chosen or not

It’s immutable
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
My favorite line was

Pulses synchronized

I liked how this poem seem to take cold Jason and emotional Spinelli and mash them into one being
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 2 . 8/2/2009
I didn't understand the title so I googled it.

My favorite part of this one was

Achieve it


It lasts for

The moment,

This one seemed to me to be about secrets that go on in that penthouse when no one is looking. The way it started was like the camera, or a pair of eyes, moving up the staircase and then outside the closed bedroom door where inside they are making love.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
There is a delicateness to this poem that is in sharp contrast to the first few lines where it seems like it is about someone being forced into a sexual act they don't want. Its an interesting contrast between ugly and beautiful. Maybe it is about one person being more dominant or more forceful but underneath it is what both of them desire most.