Reviews for Dusk: The Awesome Edward Story
korijarrells chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
So...I got to thinking...I think you could write something with this edward. Make a prequel to twilight about him being really bad then turn it into twilight where he's trying to hide all this cause he falls for her. Then just make a few twists in the books and add a few lemons. Id do it but im not a good writer. Lol
korijarrells chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
genisus chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
lizzy-sarah'-teampaul chapter 3 . 5/31/2010
this is going to be an awesome story ;L
XxxXoKorkieBabyoXxxX chapter 3 . 4/6/2010
Write the past sexual thingy! And make it funny! LOL
XxxXoKorkieBabyoXxxX chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
I love it! It's freaking epic! It's so freaking funny! But I almost chucked at the tampon bit! Ewie
lolabug chapter 3 . 11/25/2009
I loved it. SCREW your friend write more anyway. I believe in you. You don't need the book.
tobescaredofthedark13 chapter 4 . 11/23/2009
I am slightly disturbed and slightly amused. Probably because the tampon part freaked me out. XD pissed is pissed? And I hope the review actually does something.
PoisonAngelMuse chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
hey I had read it!

and even review it!


dont worry,readers are like this,dont stop writing!I like it


yankeerose chapter 4 . 8/29/2009
Write stories because its your passion, not for reviews. If it brings you joy to write, then do it for yourself. I understand you are feeling frustrated, but remember its better to have a few dedicated readers than a bunch of reviews that don't mean jackshit. I'm hoping you'll continue your story, its really good.
O. N. Labbit chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
This was a really good rap poem. I'm impressed.

My only problem: I don't think Rosalie is dumb. :) I know, she's one of my fave characters.

Also, I read this and thought it was titled, "Duck: The Awesome Edward Story," not "Dusk..."

I thought you finally wrote a crackfic and it was about Edward and his beloved duck. Who knew...

~The Silly Labbit :)
PoisonAngelMuse chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
hey i have missed this fic

come on,keep writing,you are really good on it

my fic has a kick ass edward too,I like bad ass characters!

I cant wait to read more,by the way,I loved the song!


yankeerose chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
Now this is original. The tampon thing really had me freaked out...but whats a hungry vampire to do? Can't wait for more.
PoisonAngelMuse chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
really cool,i never read anything like this before,hope you keep this up!
FutureMrsRPattz chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
so awesome
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