|Reviews for Shattered Serenity|
| ShadowedPersona chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
I love RiverxOC fics and this is no exception thankyou so much firefly and serenity are my favourtie movie and tv show. I await your update with baited breath.
| PenguinOfTroy chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
I like it so far, keep going
| RJ Steamboat chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
oh! i liked this. can't wait for more!
| Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I like this story but the beginning is confusing, you have William putting the headstone on the Captain's grave (but don't say which Captain) then go on to say the rest of Serenity's crew is dead. The story then goes from William's point of view to River, Kaylee and Simon with no little page break to show the change of scene. With River's age this is not set long after the film Serenity though the beginning of your story implies a lot of time has past. I love your idea but feel it needs tidying up, perhaps with the help of Beta, especially as this has the promise of developing into a really good story. Ali D :~)
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