Reviews for Incomplete
Guest chapter 24 . 10/16
I loved this story as a teenager. But rereading it as a married adult...I hate it. I’m really sorry if that’s hurtful to you. Your writing is good, but this relationship just isn’t. This is an abusive relationship, and I absolutely hate that people fantasize about this kind of treatment from their SO. I’m really hoping you know what a healthy, loving relationship is... because this one you wrote is not. I wish you the best in life, and if you’ve been hurt like Sakura in this fic, please know it is not ok, and you could always tell someone.
Tropicallight chapter 39 . 10/1
Okay so I don't know where to start, haha. First things first I really liked your story. You weren't kidding when you said it wad going to be dramatic. Ah, I wish Sasuke would spend that much time with Sakura and Sarada!
Sasuke was a complete asshole in starting but well he made it anyway. And I can't believe Sakura's dad? And Karin lol. She was freaking crazy.
I couldn't fathom Tenten and Sakura as best friends tho. I believe Ino would have been more of a best friend to her. Anyway this is AU so it doesn't matter. Naruto is same loveable dork tho, haha
Guest chapter 11 . 9/3
I wish you have changed your mind about this kind of relationships. This is a kind of abuse that Sakura or any woman should NEVER accept don't matter what kind of fate brought them to that kind of reality. It's just so sick and to think you made them end up together make me think that your don't have the faintest ideia about abusive relationships. If you to this day don't find your story sick to the hell and back I wish you luck in life and would say to you sell help.
CherryBlossomJelly chapter 1 . 8/17
It’s kind of annoying reading these reviews due to The level of hate and “You are the worst writer ever because xxx” BS. Like, Sasuke is a Casanova. (Like Road to Ninja Sasuke) the AU Sasuke is an emotionless playboy. Then there are other people who are like “BRING BACK THE LEMON!” Would you rather have no story, for a lemon? Like sure perverts make the world go round but, is it essential? My point is that this is a good book, that doesn’t need your hate,
Nairi chapter 1 . 7/27
English it's not my first language and usually I don't review... but I want you to know ( who knows... maybe someday you will read this) It's a really good first chapter. I love when the writers just get in the story without making it longer with unwanted long paragraphs of how the characters will get there. Of course, there are good examples for that kind of stories too but I prefer when they start like you - already in the problems XD

Uhh. I also love the stories with broken love and tragic storyline... I don't know why. In reality I hate when this kind of things happens. I wonder what would Freud say about this XD Lol.
Hakerz374 chapter 24 . 7/7
Nooooooooooo! Why the lemon! (I get the reason, but stilllllllll...)

HollyNinetales chapter 31 . 6/22
Okay. Okayyyy. I've tried really hard to love this story. Like, really hard. I've binge read 31 chapters of this all night long. It's really well written, grammar and flow wise. But now I'm just pissed off. Sasuke has cheated on Sakura multiple times, has mentally abused her for almost their entire marriage, and is a possessive asshole. He is literally the reason she ran out of his office, was in an accident and lost her baby. I just can not deal at this point. I want to keep reading because it's well written, I'm forcing myself to quit reading because it's a sick abusive sorry line. I apologize for leaving such a harsh comment, like I said the grammar and everything is great. But damn, idk what kind of relationships you're around but this is the farthest thing from healthy I've ever seen. Even for a fanfiction.
It's a secret chapter 39 . 6/18
Nice fic u wrote there friend..kudos to ya! Though it isn't Gd 4 my hearteuT.T...too much melodrama..tsk tsk...foolish little sasuke-teme...
Guest chapter 39 . 6/16
Amazing story, I loved every single word of it
WTracy29 chapter 1 . 6/12
Honestly you made Sakura such a bitch and I don’t understand what was the point. She is getting drunk with her friends and Rubbing her ass against Naruto. I get that she wants to get back at Sasuke, but this is unrealistic and does not empower Sakura at all. It makes her seem like a slut and ungrateful. Also, don’t write about an abusive relationship like this. You are creating this scenario of an unhealthy relationship and make it a happy ending. This is romanticizing abuse and you should put it a more realistic perspective. Any readers coming, don’t read this. It’s not worth it.
AP111 chapter 31 . 6/12
Ok so first let me say that I have never left a review before, but your story just made me so angry that I had to. I understand a need to have a happy ending, but I feel that nonprofessional writers often don't recognize that a sad ending would not only be far more realistic but would also be much more meaningful over a happy one. There is absolutely no way that after all the shit tbat happened between them sakura somehow managed to fall in love with him, nor would she choose to stay with him were this a real life situation. I understand that this is a fictional story based on fictional characters but I just couldn't get behind this.

I do feel however that I must say that the story had a nice pace and I quite enjoyed your writing, it was just the overall idea that love prevails all that i disagree with.
twinkies20 chapter 39 . 6/7
I've got to say thank you so much for writing this masterpiece. I am actually surprised that I ended up loving this story so much considering that I'm not the type who loves dramatic type of fanfics. Thank you for finishing this story! Its been a roller coaster ride of emotions from the beginning up to end!
Wangz chapter 16 . 6/3
Wangz chapter 1 . 6/3
HeartOfAServant chapter 39 . 6/1
I’ve read this story years ago and i’m reading it again. Its still as amazing as it was when i’ve first read it. You have displayed their emotions very well without deviating from the original characters. You’ve portrayed Sasuke and Sakura so well that i feels they would exactly be like this had it been a real au. Well except of Sasuke being a manwhore. You did an amazing job with Sakura. I mean she stick with Sasuke through thick and thin just like in the original canon. Always forgiving and accepting to him. Well done
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