Poor Edward :(

I'm surprised they didn't rip her arms off.

Those letters are killer. :(

That chapter was a sweet one.

So much angst :(

Wow, what a rollercoaster of a chapter.

Jake the jerk is being very supportive about her book store.

Over a hundred years old and still stupid in some ways.

Interesting term for ice cream, lol

Crazy kids.

Jake imprinted on Gabby. I just know it.

This was written almost a decade ago so I’m pretty sure you’ll never see this. That being said, I would like to first say I love this story so far as a whole. You’re a fantastic writer. The only thing I’m struggling to get through is how horrible Jacob is. He’s acting like an abuser would. Maybe that’s where you’re going with this, I don’t know, but this is no longer simple insecurity. He’s manipulating Bella and guilting her and just ugh! He makes me skin crawl. Bella isn’t behaving much better, if I’m being honest. She knows she doesn’t love him and she’s just stringing him along.
Edward has his own issues, always has, but so far he’s the one I’m most concerned about getting a happy ending.

They are shape shifters

Great beginning! What happened to Victoria? Is she still being hunted?

Jacob is such a child.