|Reviews for Transcendence|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Amazing amazing story so far! The only thing that bothers me about it is that it hasn't been updated in four years! If you're still out there, can you please finish it, or at least keep writing? It's such a unique story! I really want to know what happened to them all, and why it was just the gifted ones who were targeted or affected.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
| davidahare chapter 8 . 7/29/2013
I just hope that this story will be updated and then finished.
| sandy.morganlopez chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Awesome...can't wait for more!
| sandy.morganlopez chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
Okay...LOVING your stories so far! PLEASE tell me that Bella DOES get pregnant and SETH imprints with their little girl?! LOL Can't wait to see where you go with this! :)))))
| happymommy83 chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
I know that you haven't touched this on FF for over 3 years but I am hooked and would like to know how it all ends so please, please, please finish it so the rest of us can truly know what is going on in that creative head of yours.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
You should really finish this story. Such a cliffie. How is real life treating you. for me ti sucks and I come here to get my relief, but my story isn't finished. boo. lol. Help a brotha out.
| EvanRachelandNikkiReedFanx chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
I know you last update this story a long time ago, but I recently found it and I've read the whole thing, including the prequel over the space of two days!
I love this story, it's full of suspense and excitement, everything for a good story. I'm begging you to carry on the story! I know I'm not the only one as I've read other reviews.
You're a great writer and the story kept me interested the whole time. So please please when you have spare time update, I really wanna know what happens next!
| jdc0630 chapter 8 . 2/2/2013
Yes...everyone that has ever been in my life. WE ARE ALL AFTER JUST HUMAN !
Mankind is the biggest weakest link in this chain called humanity...we are not infallable...we are not indestructible...we are not GOD !
Hell, I'd even have to admit without hesitancy (?) that I am one of HIS biggest fuck-ups...LOL.
I have reached the last chapter you have posted of this story & I am hoping & praying you are going to finish this.
IF you need help...pre-reader, beta, someone with some input of ideas...ANYTHING...I am your
TO GO TO PERSON...24/7. I am dying for an ending to this story.
You have killed me with this cliffy.
I hope to hear from you soon about future updates on this story.
Thank you so much for sharing it with me.
| jdc0630 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Well, I had come to read the sequel & find you have it on hiatus. There are however eight chapters I intend to read, BUT...I am hoping to find you are going to continue on with new updates.
It is truly a series of stories that NEEDS/DESERVES to be finished...to be told...of their journey. They had been through so much in...A Darker Shade of Twilight...it would be wonderful to see...even though they are going to have to go through trials in this story...but to see them FINALLY HAPPY & TOGETHER...no matter what kind of horrors you choose to throw at them.
I hope to hear from you that you have every intention of finishing this story & hopefully start seeing updates SOON.
Thank you for sharing your stories with me.
| babesbraves chapter 8 . 11/30/2012
Please please finish your book! After reading a book and a half for it to be left on a cliff hanger like this is unbearable its like the last half of breaking dawn being missing you are left in the dark and desperately want to know how it turns out!
| misscat76 chapter 8 . 8/24/2012
So I got Darker Shade of Twilight as a fic rec, and started reading this sequel, & see that it was put on hiatus...2 yrs ago? Wow that's a long time! I was just wondering if you were considering finishing this story or if its a lost cause. I was really enjoying it and came to the end of chapter 8 left on a cliffhanger and was like NOOOO! I know that sometimes with writers, they lose inspiration or real-life steps in and they don't have time to write anymore. I just want to let you know that if you ever decide to finish this, you have at least one reader who is anxiously waiting. Even if you decide never to write fanfic again, finishing this story could be your big finale. Just throwing some things at you, hoping you'll finish this story...please...PRETTY PLEASE?
| k1942 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
That was a wonderful chapter, full of the regaining of their happiness, and the final expression of their love. It was just plain beautiful!
| jansails chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
I started with the preceding piece, & I have to tell you I practically cried or choked up with each chapter from either tears of joy, sweetness, or tears of heartbreak or anger.
Now, I've read through the 8 chapters of Transcendence & feel exactly the same way.
What a powerful rendering you've given us, a totally different version with such beautifully drawn & detailed characters.
You've brought us so much closer to the essence of each Cullen-Hale personality, & to Bella as well in reading your series.
Thanks to you, I feel like I really know these characters most vulnerable & their strongest features.
I've often read fanfiction I've rolled my eyes at or thought I can't believe the author went there, made those choices, etc., but I never felt that way about your writing.
You surprised me more often than not, horrified me a lot, shattered me often, & always, always captivated me.
Brilliancy, sheer brilliancy, a complete pleasure to read, addictive, compelling, enthralling.
Thank you so much for sharing,
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/7/2012
Hope you'll post a new chapter soon!
| Kemq chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Oh no you have not poster since 3-20-10
I hope you are still writing.