Reviews for Detention and Lemons
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2018
IT IS SO FUNNY
Aaliyah Taylor chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Awwwwwe, soo cute! Thnx 4 writing this and the lemon flavored candy part was sooo cute and funny. I like cute fluff, too!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Haha lemon candy
Judy chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Hi, I have been reading fan fictions of this couple for awhile now :) I found myself wondering at each that something was missing or it was a bit too traumatizing to read and then I came across yours This story is perfect I love it so much :3 and I really thank you for putting it here Please continue to write great stories and next time I hope they'll be longer :3
NerdySamSays chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
good job
Bumblewyn chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I liiii~ke it
X-tsuki-no-bara-x chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Love fun stories like this n_n not too long or deep, (just realized how wrong that sounds-) but always good from start to end. (that too actually- jesus, so much innuendo potential!)

Cool x :P
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
haha that was great! geez riku and risa have really perverted minds, but who can blame them? the sounds coming from the door were very suggestive. .
TheBewingedWolf chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Loved it all! When i thourgh if couldn't get better, if got even better! XD I hold my breath for avile.. 3 And I laught a lot! XD I din't read fast but I read slow... I think you wrote 'me' instead of 'he' once, but thats all... Loved it!
Daaro Moltor chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Oh, yes you ARE perverted! XD And it is hilarious! ;)

"Maybe... maybe I wouldn't mind having a squeel to this storry..." XD
Zailana chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
OMG! So funny! XD

Great story, really! Unfortunately it's only rated T... dammit.
unwanted- angel chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
this was cute! the whole lemon thing made me think there was going to be, well, lemon. but it's rated t, so i was like, ok no sex, so why is it called lemon? anyway, i liked this. make another.