|Reviews for Elemental|
| CoppertopJ chapter 9 . 6/21
My power would be to always be healthy, and fit. To never gain weight, and never have to diet. ;)
| stained17 chapter 30 . 6/8
Oh. My. Goodness. I have seen this story pop up when I have looked for something new to read, but never got around to reading it. When I started it yesterday, it was a true challenge to stop reading! I absolutely love this story and love these two. I loved seeing their growth and I’m so thankful I decided to take the plunge and read this! Thanks for a wonderful story!
| cullen2798 chapter 30 . 5/25
This story was absolutely amazing! Definitely a new favourite. I loved the way Bella and Edward’s relationship progressed! And I literally could not put this story down!
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/17
Love your story
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/11
This story is truly profound and unique. It feels like both a grounding and elevating experience.
| R. Jersey Leigh chapter 30 . 5/9
This story was recommended on a Facebook group a few days ago. I was desperate for something new and something that could stand on its own.
This just... blew me away.
Your characters weren’t without their faults but it made them so real! And the plot was vastly different than anything I was remotely expecting and have ever read before.
I’m truly in awe.
This story truly does stand out and stand on its own. It’s powerful, in theme and in dictation. It just absolutely astounds me.
I don’t know if you’ll see this review since it’s 7 years after you completed this fic, but you thanked your readers for letting you tell a story; I just wanted to thank you for telling the story.
As an aspiring writer, it’s stories like this one that inspire me to keep going, keep trying. Writing is a work of art, but telling a good story is truly magical.
And you have the power! ;P
I’m a new forever fan. 3
| bethabetha chapter 22 . 4/20
i’m really disliking many of the parents in this story, as well as edward. the only featured characters who treat bella with any sort of respect at all are alice, jasper, rose, and emmett, and they’re hardly mentioned. bella also really needs to grow a spine and stand up for herself. she’s letting everyone walk all over her and i’m starting to honestly not care what happens to her at all. it’s getting difficult to continue because of this. though i will say i have noticed a marked improvement in spelling and grammar since the author mentioned she had gotten a different beta. much much better!
| bethabetha chapter 7 . 4/17
i read this a while back, and when i found it on another author’s favorites list i decided to read through it again. i’m so glad i did. i love the original plot, and the characters are all wonderful in their own own ways, some i love and some i very much dislike because the author has written them so well. the only complaint i have is that there are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes. this definitely would have benefitted from a good beta. the mistakes are pretty distracting.
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/13
| Guest chapter 26 . 4/13
Everyone is on edge; it’s no wonder they’re snapping at each other. I’m glad they were willing to listen, even if it took them a minute. They’ll all have to lean on and believe in each other for this to work. I hope Bella can mend the fence between her and her parents. They may not get another chance. Loved it!
| FyreMasen chapter 30 . 4/13
Beautiful! And I'd be remiss if I din't politely beg for a sequel :)
| Sunshine1220 chapter 30 . 4/13
And they all lived happily ever after... I absolutely loved this story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
| FyreMasen chapter 29 . 4/13
*sighs* Another re-read almost over and even with at least 2 under my belt, this still gave me all the feels. Love it :)
| Sunshine1220 chapter 29 . 4/13
Carlisle finally sees her for the powerful woman she is. The town is safe, if not scarred, but they’ll recover. And ExB finally get their happy ending. Loved it!
| Sunshine1220 chapter 28 . 4/13
That was incredible! Goose. Bumps!