Reviews for Elemental
drummergal07 chapter 30 . 12/15
Very good writing! I enjoyed reading it and discovering everything along with Bella!
twiclare chapter 27 . 12/12
I'm rereading this and I've loved it just as much the second time around. Thank you!
WorshipTheLight LiveForTheTwi chapter 30 . 12/8
I love this story. I have read it multiple times. I so hope you think of a sequel for it. Amazing.
Gondolier chapter 1 . 11/20
After how many years, this is STILL my favorite fanfiction. Just read it for the fourth time :).
Rose chapter 30 . 10/12
Such an amazing story! It just gets better each time I read it. You are such an awesome writer. You have the ability to make the readers feel captivated by your story from the second they start reading it. Please keep on writing more wonderful stories and thank you for sharing this one!
Twilighted Nimi chapter 30 . 9/13
Definitely nothing like something I've ever read before:-) Really loved it! Thanks for sharing.
Gbgagbgy chapter 1 . 8/19
I rarely EVER leave reviews but for this I have to. This is one of the most intricate stories I have read in such a long time. Reading this had really made me miss reading good stories that I can truly delve into and lose myself to. The only thing I would have liked to have seen is an earlier introduction to Bella's resistance to doing what she's told without getting any actual answers to make the scenario seem more real. And i would looove an outtake of a more detailed account of what she feels through her's and Edward's bond since you touched on what he can feel with er bond to her elements and how SHE feels with her elements but not as much with how she feels his elements trough him! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!
TheSecretLifeOfAFan chapter 30 . 8/16
I've read this story about three times, and I'm about to start again for a fourth. I absolutely love this story. It captures me on another level. I feel like I'm reading a published book. You should DEFINITELY try to get this published. Dystopian society books have been on the rise for a while. (I know this isn't a true dystopian story but I consider it in that category) You could make it a series! Everyone loves a true published. There are so many people in this world that would devour this amazing story you've created. There have been so many authors published that wrote fan fiction!
untilthevery3nd chapter 30 . 7/16
Wow! I have never wanted to read fanfic of a fanfic more than I want to right now. Amazing. Beautiful. Creative. Touching. All I could think about until I finished it!
Guest chapter 30 . 7/4
This was a great story! Personally I would have liked MORE lemons, but it was really good!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4
Wow! I've heard of orgasms as relief of menstrual cramps, but Holy Moly! mate or die of immense PAIN!? Gives a whole new meaning to "I was just DYING to get in your pants."!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/4
Earth, as I like gardening. my grandma had a green HAND; being able to make entire greenhouses of plants flourish ala Bella would be fantastic!
Jane chapter 2 . 6/13
I just discovered this story. I'm loving it...such an interesting storyline.
Midnight 2401 chapter 1 . 6/8
God, I think I'm reading this for the tenth time now. I don't know if you're still reading reviews on ffn but I just wanted to remind you that this is the best story ever written on this site, and you're brilliant for imagining this and writing it. There is a serious bunch of great authors and stories here but I keep coming back to this one. Elemental is a serious work of art and I just can't describe how much I love it and how awesome I think you are. I would love to see even a glimpse into the future of this story but I know it won't happen. :D
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5
I don't even know how this story is so popular and how it got so many reviews. Fifty shades of grey is written better than this and that's saying something because that book was poorly written
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