Reviews for Elemental
quartkneerocks chapter 24 . 4/21
I like your story and it seems like you have themes of feminism here, oppression of women, denial of choice, teaching men to repress emotions. It’s a great exploration of these themes. However, I was really turned off by Esme saying that Becky trying to be a son for her father was overachieving. Do you believe that men are higher achieving than women?
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 30 . 2/22
That was really a beautiful journey and thank you for sharing with us!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 27 . 2/22
I think it's pretty obvious that it's supposed to be a strong mated couple in the circle who can share their bond to communicate during the ritual. And as everyone has pointed out...Edward and Bella's bond has grown much quicker than anyone expected. Plus, they each have the ability to handle more than one element and would take some of the stress off the other performing that ritual. Not to mention the book belonged to Bella's namesake. Bella will be the one to figure it out and bring it to fruition, I'm sure. ;)
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 12 . 2/21
Well, that was...disturbing.
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 9 . 2/21
Renee shows signs of being bipolar...
Is that why everyone walks on eggshells around her?
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 3 . 2/20
This is so interesting!
It sort of reminds me of a cross between The Craft and The Last Airbender!
I know you finished this 11 years ago, but I'm glad I'm finally working down my TBR list!
The ladies at RobAttack and The Lemonade Stand are never wrong. :)
MissWM chapter 30 . 2/16
This was quite different. I liked it. Thanks for sharing
Escapee2FF chapter 1 . 1/27
have read this a couple of times. such a great witches and mating story and would be a great movie! I keep coming back and enjoy yoyr writing style with this story. love mating stories but not many great onea. well done
Acbr chapter 1 . 1/22
I don't know how many times I’ve re read this story, it’s just so perfect and unique that I keep coming back over and over again. I really wish you could publish it, it would be such an enormous hit! Thank you for sharing it with us.
whitmanlover chapter 1 . 1/13
I'm here just to remind you how amazing this story is, how we waited and waited for an update, and how many of us still come back from time to time just to read our favourite scenes or chapters. Sometimes I even hope to find a futuretake of E&B as adults in charge, but then I change my mind because I really liked the ending. Thank you.
Vero Diaz chapter 18 . 1/13
Bitch, your family basically destroyed her mother and now you’re asking for clemency for your bitch of a cousin? Hell nah! Bella, just banish that bitch and be done with this family
Vero Diaz chapter 17 . 1/13
She should have left that bastard and leave Forks as soon as possible
Vero Diaz chapter 16 . 1/13
It still doesn’t excuse his asshole behavior
Vero Diaz chapter 13 . 1/13
So she doesn’t get to choose who she imprints with, but she also doesn’t get to choose where she lives or how the place looks like (decorations and stuff)
Vero Diaz chapter 10 . 1/13
Honestly Alice has a serious problem with boundaries and it’s getting on my nerves
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