Reviews for Elemental
Rai chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
Oh man, I just checked the publishing date and this story turns 10 this years! Omg. You'll never read my reviews then lol I hope you're well, tho. I'm truly enjoying this fic!
Rai chapter 2 . 2/11/2019
Are they really her parents? Bc they sound a little off with all this hiding. Idk. Poor Bella is clueless on what to do lol same, girl
Rai chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
I just found this fic and oh man, I'm so hooked!
Rue1921 chapter 30 . 2/13/2019
I haven't read your story in many years and it was great reading it through fresh eyes. I really enjoy these characters and their story. Hate how much Bella was expected to give up for Edward though. Not a very healthy relationship dynamic.
Foenix2phorks chapter 1 . 1/26/2019
I read this before months ago, now I'm back for another taste. I love it! It's a perfect blend of Twilight, fantasy, with brand new story elements. You probably will never bother reading this considering how old this story is, but I say Thank You anyway for such a great, interesting story!
el chapter 14 . 1/4/2019
Your story is very good. It is written well and the idea of elemetal magic is perfect. The thing that bothers me is the male domination theme. Its in a lot of aspects. Edward is a jerk towards Bella, and its Bella that has to try to accomodate him? every one tells her to try to understand him? And on top of that, she has to be the one to apologise to him? Not to mention all the other examples so far in the story indicating that men are superior. Anyway, i just thought that i should mention this. But thanks for sharing your fic.
Liza chapter 30 . 12/26/2018
Such a heartwarming ending. I’d love to read about the future of these two crazy kids! You’ve a real writing gift, thank you for sharing your ideas with us.
Suli chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
Please please please post the outtake you wrote for the charity please :(

I didn’t have money to contribute but I would love to read more of my bbs

Pleaseeee post it

Pleaseeeee
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2018
Wow. This story was really amazing. This Bella was Very smart and Edward was adorable at the end.
I enjoyed a lot, in fact I want to read it again.
Thanks for Your time
Regards
LQUEZ
DJW Isabella Cullen chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
This is without a doubt one of my very favorite ff stories
bunnysugarlover chapter 12 . 11/26/2018
Omg the secondhand embarrassment in this chapter got me like...
Valya 001 chapter 30 . 10/30/2018
This is one of the best fic that I have ever read!
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
twirob chapter 30 . 10/19/2018
thank you so much for sharing this AMAZINGLY AWESOME! story with us ;) I'm also glad that the Swans have an heir to carry on the name ;D
RandyWriter chapter 30 . 10/18/2018
Such an incredible story! I loved it all! A very different but powerful story! How they barely tolerated each other, but were simultaneously interested! Love it all! So happy to see how it ended! So visual and all the encompassing! All the characters played such important roles too! Thank you for making my day, well it took me a couple of days, lol! Loved it!
samiam77 chapter 30 . 10/14/2018
I absolutely loved this story! Im so glad i finally got to read it
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