Reviews for Elemental
Sunshine1220 chapter 23 . 4/12/2018
Good, old Alice; always in Bella's business. Lol! Becky and Carlisle are really starting to bug me. If they're expecting something from her, they should just tell her. Sooo frustrating. Though, Billy seemed to offer them some useful advice and support. Great chapter! I’ll be back tomorrow to hopefully finish this!
Sunshine1220 chapter 22 . 4/12/2018
Subconscious sexy times ... now if only they could communicate as easily verbally ... ;) While I understand the neeed to push them, it feels like they're setting these kids up to fail during the training. And I can only imagine the pressure they're under. Great chapter!
FyreMasen chapter 22 . 4/12/2018
Things heated up in more ways than one lol :)
FyreMasen chapter 21 . 4/12/2018
Yeah, that working together with the elements was way more sensual than I remember. Next :)
Sunshine1220 chapter 21 . 4/12/2018
Those bad dreams of hers feel foreboding. Something big is on the horizon. I'm a little put out with Bella, though. She's expecting Edward to share his feelings with her, but she's still keeping so much from him. She shouldn't expect him to talk if she isn't willing to. And at least Elizabeth seems to have faith in their combined abilities. Great chapter!
Sunshine1220 chapter 20 . 4/12/2018
Secrets all around... I have to wonder how successful Grandpa Cullen, then Carlisle have been leading the coven with keeping their emotions out of it. Poor Edward has been raised to think being an emotional robot is the best way to lead. Hopefully Bella can help him see using them is more beneficial than not. Her emotions, connection, I think is what makes her so powerful. Great chapter with lots of explanations!
FyreMasen chapter 20 . 4/12/2018
Two steps forward, one step back. Love their growth to here, though, as compared to only a few chapters back. Carlisle, eh, not so sure how I feel about all the adults at this point, aside from Esme. She's awesome :)
Sunshine1220 chapter 19 . 4/11/2018
Poor Bella. Yeah, I'm not sure I could trust them after all that, either. And it looks like Edward is trying to make an effort. Baby steps for them, but steps nonetheless. Great chapter! I'll be back tomorrow to read more!
Sunshine1220 chapter 18 . 4/11/2018
Grandpa Cullen is not a nice man. Wow! Can anyone say power trip? And he's not even the coven leader any more! I was happy to see Edward stand by Bella and support her through all that. Off to read one more for the night!
Sunshine1220 chapter 17 . 4/11/2018
That explains sooo much! I feel so bad for Renee. To just be discarded and ignored had to be painful, especially when her best friend was part of it. Hopefully ExB can work to get past this and learn to trust each other.
FyreMasen chapter 19 . 4/11/2018
Some really good growth going on here for ExB, and finally some hard questions for the parents who did so much wrong here :)
FyreMasen chapter 18 . 4/11/2018
I am such a liar, but I can't stay away :)
FyreMasen chapter 17 . 4/11/2018
Ahhh, a much better end to my daily readings :)
Sunshine1220 chapter 16 . 4/11/2018
Whaaaat?! Oh, this is going to be just one more thing for her to process. The poor girl has been through enough, but now to hear her mother killed someone? If I was her, I would have hit the roof already about things being kept from me. Can't wait to devour more of this! Dare I hope ExB are trying to make things work between them, even if only for the sake of the coven? Great chapter!
FyreMasen chapter 16 . 4/11/2018
Well, shit! This was supposed to be my last chapter for the day, and you totally ruined that. Now I have to read more :)
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