Reviews for Elemental
Guest chapter 29 . 9/29/2020
was ben's father part of the tribe?
archy12 chapter 23 . 10/1/2020
Having a doubt is good sometimes, as it makes one push themselves, but yes, Bella has to be confident with Fire quickly. They don't have much time...
archy12 chapter 22 . 10/1/2020
Bella's complaint is valid that way, she's been thrown in the deep end, and her lessons are more of tests. No wonder she got angry.
I hope she gets to prove that some emotion is good while dealing with the elements.
archy12 chapter 19 . 9/30/2020
Yeah, trust once broken is difficult to build. And from her parents, especially? :(
archy12 chapter 18 . 9/30/2020
They supported each other when needed. That's good.
Grandpa Cullen...needs to let go of the past. I know, easier said than done.
archy12 chapter 17 . 9/30/2020
That was a sad story, full of anger and miscommunication. Bravo Bella, for still promising to work on everything.
If everyone has to work together, Carlisle has to treat the Swans better.
archy12 chapter 16 . 9/30/2020
Uh-oh, what is this new (and probably very unpleasant) information?
archy12 chapter 15 . 9/30/2020
Hm, tube light moment, Edward? :)
He needed to hear all that though, and to see Bella as her own person.
Every time I read 'Circular driveway', I am reminded of the Guest Reviewer who complained the description was unnecessary. :D
archy12 chapter 14 . 9/30/2020
Hmm, that was a little better...
archy12 chapter 13 . 9/30/2020
Esme's story helps some, but as for liking each other...obviously not. :)
archy12 chapter 12 . 9/30/2020
Ugh, that sounded all kinds of painful, even though in the end Bella was okay.
Will they begin to like each other just because they have imprinted?
archy12 chapter 11 . 9/30/2020
Ouch. Now her heart (or should I say soul) will be at war with her head...
Painful.
archy12 chapter 10 . 9/30/2020
Ha, Edward almost lost the battle he's been waging with himself, didn't he? Oh, pesky feelings! :)
archy12 chapter 9 . 9/30/2020
Definitely fire. Aries is fire, after all! :)
Seems lots of things will happen once Bella turns eighteen.
archy12 chapter 8 . 9/30/2020
Lauren is so stupid. If possible, her power should be taken away from her. She could have hurt her classmates badly.
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