Reviews for Elemental |
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abbyweyr chapter 17 . 5/12 They are underestimating Bella. She has had so much thrown at her and she is still standing. |
abbyweyr chapter 16 . 5/12 that is unexpected |
abbyweyr chapter 15 . 5/12 good she finally told him what he needed to do and he seems maybe start to realize how correct she is. |
abbyweyr chapter 14 . 5/12 oh, Bella had to apologize but not Edward!? He is the one that was rude to her from beginning. He needs to apologize. |
abbyweyr chapter 12 . 5/12 stupid Edward for making it harder and painful for them both. |
abbyweyr chapter 11 . 5/12 blame Edward for being a jerk and making things so much harder. |
abbyweyr chapter 4 . 5/12 wonder if Edward is feeling a draw to her even if she is not yet 18. |
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 5/11 This was mentioned on Twilight Fan Fic Finders group. Interesting start. |
shannon30033 chapter 21 . 2/14 love. |
kadronya chapter 30 . 12/24/2023 I love this story thanks for it! |
Bella chapter 9 . 11/11/2023 I think it would fire because I like fire |
TheObsessed1 chapter 12 . 9/2/2023 Misogynistic RAPE nothing you say can change my mind. Of course their society of Witches, which used to be only women; is ruled by men. The men have to give the women some of their power. Pfftt! Why not just call it semen. Patriarchy is taught to women and men both from birth. Women are truly the stronger of the two because we birth the babies. Not romantic in any sense whatsoever. My ideal story would be her choosing her own life. |
Teen-dork chapter 11 . 8/11/2023 Tsk tsk Edward what else did you except? For her to run into your arms? I would have fled too if I was her. |
Teen-dork chapter 1 . 8/10/2023 Finally starting this story after it being in my library for so many years. Enjoying it so farand hope to complete it |
Teen-dork chapter 4 . 8/10/2023 Okay why is no one talking about the fact that Lauren and Edward are cousins!? Or it's okay just because they ain't siblings (ー) That's just messed up |