|Reviews for Elemental|
| Guest chapter 29 . 9/29/2020
was ben's father part of the tribe?
| archy12 chapter 23 . 10/1/2020
Having a doubt is good sometimes, as it makes one push themselves, but yes, Bella has to be confident with Fire quickly. They don't have much time...
| archy12 chapter 22 . 10/1/2020
Bella's complaint is valid that way, she's been thrown in the deep end, and her lessons are more of tests. No wonder she got angry.
I hope she gets to prove that some emotion is good while dealing with the elements.
| archy12 chapter 19 . 9/30/2020
Yeah, trust once broken is difficult to build. And from her parents, especially? :(
| archy12 chapter 18 . 9/30/2020
They supported each other when needed. That's good.
Grandpa Cullen...needs to let go of the past. I know, easier said than done.
| archy12 chapter 17 . 9/30/2020
That was a sad story, full of anger and miscommunication. Bravo Bella, for still promising to work on everything.
If everyone has to work together, Carlisle has to treat the Swans better.
| archy12 chapter 16 . 9/30/2020
Uh-oh, what is this new (and probably very unpleasant) information?
| archy12 chapter 15 . 9/30/2020
Hm, tube light moment, Edward? :)
He needed to hear all that though, and to see Bella as her own person.
Every time I read 'Circular driveway', I am reminded of the Guest Reviewer who complained the description was unnecessary. :D
| archy12 chapter 14 . 9/30/2020
Hmm, that was a little better...
| archy12 chapter 13 . 9/30/2020
Esme's story helps some, but as for liking each other...obviously not. :)
| archy12 chapter 12 . 9/30/2020
Ugh, that sounded all kinds of painful, even though in the end Bella was okay.
Will they begin to like each other just because they have imprinted?
| archy12 chapter 11 . 9/30/2020
Ouch. Now her heart (or should I say soul) will be at war with her head...
| archy12 chapter 10 . 9/30/2020
Ha, Edward almost lost the battle he's been waging with himself, didn't he? Oh, pesky feelings! :)
| archy12 chapter 9 . 9/30/2020
Definitely fire. Aries is fire, after all! :)
Seems lots of things will happen once Bella turns eighteen.
| archy12 chapter 8 . 9/30/2020
Lauren is so stupid. If possible, her power should be taken away from her. She could have hurt her classmates badly.