Avatar the last airbender

well written

I think this is my 5th time reading. Yes I cried, again! I keep thinking that when the thought of twins doesn't send horror down her spine that she will be ready. It took me several years, but the horror does leave eventually. My twins are 3 now! She is still very young! I wish there was a sequel or more outtakes. I need more of these characters!

after the prologue? yup...totally uninterested

enjoyed reading

Chapter 28 has to be my favorite! It was the scariest to read the part where they were being chased. The story was amazing! I wish you allotted more time with character development, tho. But whatever. I had an amazing time reading it.

Bella being so passive is really frustrating. She needs a back bone or at least some self respect. So much for feminism.

So different. Loved this story! Good witches. Nice to read something so different. Well written!

This was amazing! I can't get over how refreshing it was to read something that didn't involve too much pettiness. Loved it

I'm sorry but I hate! The Bella character, she is such a baby! She's sooo oh, my little emotions, grow up!

This is good

Wow.
The next generation is arriving.
Not long till it hits Bella and Edward.
They are going to make great leaders.
Thank you for sharing.

Well I have a bagged mixed of emotions.
Happiness, they did it, sadness cause I'm so happy.
I want to jump for joy, I want to cry. Lol.
Yeah maybe they'll not underestimate Bella any more.
So happy at how far they hand come.

Wow.
Maybe they'll listen to Bella in future.
Maybe her ancestors were what her dreams were about. Telling her/showing her what needed to be done.

I think Bella is on to something.
But how will she get them to listen?
Bridges are being mended slowly.