That went well.
She tried to fight it but didn't work out too well for them.
Can't wait to see how things will be now.

Yep.
Had to be.
Well it just got a little more interesting.
Glad Bella was able to enjoy her party.
Bella just can't catch a break.
One thing after another to deal with.

Oh my.
Edward seems a bit of an Ass.
But still there is something about him.
Oooo, they almost kissed.
Something keeps pulling them together.
I guess he feels safe and able to be himself with Emmett etc. He knows that some of the others could just be after the title so he keeps his guard up at school and around Bella cause he doesn't know her yet, but I think there could be more to it. Time will tell I guess.
Bella is coming along really nicely.

Wow.
Never ending for Bella.
I really can't wait to see what's Renee's issue is.
Is she going to be able to handle helping Bella.
And some talk of a possible mating?
Seems Edward can't stay away even if be tries.
Maybe as he's in the know so understands more

Why I Edward the future leader, not Alice? If it's because he has two powers, so does Esme. Then, why is Esme not the leader? If it's because Edward and Carlile are men,... That is twisted.

Not too surprised seeing Charlie is earth and Renee is fire and Bella is so powerful.
Lauren just pushed Edward closer to Bella rather than away. Haha.
She deserves what ever she gets.
Even more roller-coasters for Bella.

Edward just so happened to find himself in the same area of the library.
Coincidence or not?
Looks like Bella has a lot to learn.
And in such a short time.
Very intrigued with Renee and her reactions.

Alice is just saying what we're all thinking.
Haha.
Oh Bella.
I really despise Lauren.
But yeah. She wants to stake her claim. But you can't help the mating process.
She's gonna be pissed.
It's sure is a roller-coaster for Bella right now.

Still intrigued with Edward.
Maybe Alice is right they just need to get to know each other.
But they say both have to be 18, but with Edward being 18 and Bella being close could the forces be working already in preparation seeing Bella is already so advanced.
Can't wait to see where this will go.

Well that was interesting.
Go Bella.
Edward seems like a bit of a jerk, but there is something about him that just intrigues me.
Oh Lauren, you really are going to hate Bella more I guess.

I think my head is about to explode let alone Bella's. Haha.
This has been booked.

Wow, that's a lot to take in for Bella.
Maybe they should have been more upfront with her.
I'm guessing it maybe had more to do with Renee than Charlie.
I'm fascinated to find out more.

Well I am intrigued.
Can't wait to see how they get from here to what we read at the start.
Sounds like there will need to be lots of explanations and training.
Could we have caught an early glimpse at Edward too?
Looking forward to finding out.

What a great and unique story! Thanks so much for writing!

What a wonderful story, start to finish! I love this other world you've created and enjoyed every chapter. I can already tell this is one I'll want to re-read someday. Great work!