|Reviews for Elemental|
| x123 chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
I was wondering if Bella was Fire, too. After reading about Rosalie's reaction, I guess there is at least the possibility. I love that you update so often since the story is really captivating.
| DomMeBEdward chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
I love this story. I can't wait for more. I still KNOW Lauren needs a beat down!
| ScarlettLetters chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Our little Bella is a powerful thing, isn't she? Rose's reaction intrigues me. All these little pieces you put out there...you're spinning this web and I just want to know everything! Patience isn't my strong suit, lol. I'm sad Emmett and Rose are leaving, but that means more time for Bella at the Cullen house, yes? :)
| teambellaedward chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
| steffie20 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
I'm so intrigued and excited by this story! You've done a really great job of balancing what we know of the characters and setting and what you have created. I was so excited about the house! I kept picturing this house similar to my Great-Grandma's that I loved as a kid to explore. The greenhouse editions to the original houses was so an awesome idea! It definitely adds a unique quality as well as helps grounds the fact of their powers being an extension of themselves. I love the supernatural aspect and how you incorporated it into something that is based in nature - so complex and simple at the same time. I wonder if you have a playlist of music that accompanies the story? No worries if not, music is just a big part of my life and I'm always interested in what people listen to as inspiration. Anyways, can't wait for the next update!
| gatorgirl94 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
this was soo good but I didn't want the chapter to end :)
| Kmserenity chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Im riveted. I wish I would have found this with more of the story already written. Paitience is going to be hard on this one. Wonderful start to this. Thx!
| Zazagirl339 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
I'm glad Esme made an appearance! I can't wait to see her train Bella, and maybe do some training at the Cullen's house? I would love to see the Cullen family dynamic when everyone is together.
With a small focus on fire, is Bella going to be able to work with fire as well? Rhetorical question, as I know the answer will be coming in the story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| jantanamo chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
I think FFnet ate my review for Chapter 6. No fear, it wasn't anything insightful, just me gushing about how much I love this story and how you're setting up all the pieces.
And what a treat to get Chapter 7 so soon! Not just any chapter, but one that really starts to show us reader the magic that is so much an integral part of the story. I won't lie, I love the magic elements more than just about anything. I love how we're on the journey with Bella as she learns about her destiny. It's fascinating and I'm enjoying how much innate talent Bella seems to have. I also can't wait to really see the magic in play, with all four elements at work - to see how all the other characters handle their own gifts. So fun.
I really found it interesting to see the effects that the other 3 elements had on Bella, especially considering how much Earth needs Air and Water to survive. It's like she found a connection with the least complementary element to her own. Can't wait until Rose's reaction gets further explored.
I also can't wait to see what's up with Bella Mama. She's been resistant to the move from the beginning and her hesitations must root in something big.
I hope FFnet doesn't eat this review too - you deserve to know how much your story is enjoyed.
Thanks for the quick update!
| Ahkasha chapter 6 . 8/11/2009
Oh, so many questions that I can't asked because I know they will be answered in the story line. But was the kids the Edward and Mike get in a fight with go to their school? What is up with Edward. Why does he let Lauren hand all over him?
| jajo chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Ah... Now I have even more questions than answers after reading this chapter. My biggest has become: what the heck is going on with Renee?
And I need to go check out another fanfic if you published today.
Thank you so much for the dedication. :)
| darksunlight74 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
omg how much do i love this story let me count the ways i love that its different and not like anything out there im looking forward to the next part...love it love it love it lol
| Ahkasha chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Thanks for another great chapter! No need to ask any questions. This story is so well written that I know they will be answered in future chapters!
| Eva Von Dee chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
It was good work to work in Bella's observation of Rosalie working with her element, fire. And now this suspect piece cropped up:
"Fire came to me in a rush, like a volatile wave of heat demanding all of my attention. It was frightening at first but it was calmed by the presence of Earth. Unlike Air, it didn’t tire me, but almost lovingly encouraged me to embrace it. I opened myself up to it, and felt its heated caress.
Rose looked at me strangely, but since we were in the middle of a ritual she remained absolutely still, ready to help me if necessary."
It's given me more thought to an original idea that I had near the start of the story, hopefully it's true. Her having duel Elements of Fire and Earth would work nicely. Underline not only her power but her match to Edward.
I look forward to seeing if that pans out.
Lauren... when it happens, the smirk being wiped cleaning off her face, I'm sure I'll enjoy however you write it ;-)
Just wanted to remind; your story, skills, plot are all fucking astounding. Love what you've written so far and I'm thakful for the quick updates.
| SweetDulcinea chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
I LOVED your descriptions of each element and the ritual! That was wonderful! You are really doing an amazing job with this story - good for you sweets ) And once again...beautiful foreshadowing )