Reviews for Elemental
jajo chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Wow! Just wow. I need to process. And smoke a cigarette. Huh.

I can't wait read about the aftermath!

Thanks for updating so quickly.

I am still frustrated that I don't know what Eddie's wears under his trousers. (sigh)
DancingAtTwilight chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Wow! You updated fast! I am excited to see how the next chapter turns out!
xxxDELETEDxxx chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
**squee!** That was wonderfully written, I loved how something so primal was worked into a modern story. And, um, thanks for not having them have an audience. Because that just would've been weird.

ALSO, thank you for tweeting that you updated. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chaps but FFn hasn't been alerting me! *sad face* Anyhoo, I'll just check obsessively now.
onoimatwidard2 chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
TallulahBelle, I think I'm going fangirl on your ass. I could kiss your feet for giving us this chapter tonight. I think the reason the last chapter left me feeling desperate was because I thought we'd have to wait a while for the "consummation".

Even though the sex scene wasn't remotely romantic, there was something romantic about the inevitability of it. It doesn't seem like Bella was fighting it because it was Edward, she was fighting the lack of choice, the inevitablity.

Now I will attempt to wait patiently to see what the morning after looks like.
martdg chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Zoinks, that was intense! In a good way! I've already read it twice and I know I'll have to read it again. Now the only problem, I can't wait for the next chapter! I have a feeling I may feel that way after every one. D'OH!
Raewright chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Wow! That was intense! Very good!

Thanks for getting that out so quick! Of course, now we're all wondering about the morning after. lol
loupants chapter 12 . 9/13/2009

oh gosh. this is just one big rollercoaster ride, innit? i'm seriously loving the concept here - its so different. i can't wait to see what you do next.
bluemaybits chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Loved the chapter, I think it would be rad to see Edward's POV though.
wizziewoo123 chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
WHOAA dramatic, so glad you updated strate the way, cant wait to read what happens next! update soon!
delicateruins chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Oh yay! I'm glad you updated so fast! You really did a wonderful job of making an awkward situation, well, seem to be not so awkward. I was sort of nervous to read this chapter (seeing as they don't get along very well, and obviously that whole imprinting thing) - but you're such a wonderful writer that I didn't feel like it was really an uncomfortable chapter at all! I can't wait for the next update!
jennifer.rodrigues chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Thank you for updating so fast!
wlmarler16 chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
mikna chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Whoa, amazing chapter. You are so good at making us feel what Bella is going through, I was twitchy just reading it. Looking forward to more. Thanks for updating super fast, and the wild ride.
janneyt chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
You are incredibly awesome to post another chapter so quickly-thank you fanfic queen!

That was a great chapter. I would LOVE to read a chappie in EPOV. I want to know what he is thinking, how does he feel? He must have known that this was probably going to happen, did he realize it could happen in school?
Jaguarsolaris chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Thanks for the quick update. drama on the next chapter. i still think that bella should make edward work for her.
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