Reviews for The Carrier
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 13 . 5/18
love it will there be a sequel

Stasia R. Ravenclaw
Black Eye-Patch Pie chapter 2 . 3/26
I like the plot of this fanfiction but I always find it quite confusing when it switches point of view so much, especially when I am not really familiar with the characters yet. The way I phrased this was weird but yeah... XD
DragonFire Princess chapter 13 . 3/17
Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 11 . 1/7
interesting. I like that Ron is a minister's son. Kinda nice twist
Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 1 . 1/7
interesting story. I can't wait to keep reading!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/4
You seriously need a beta.
HikariKurayami88 chapter 13 . 12/23/2014
It was fun. A little weird with the whole founders thing though with an interesting twist. Same grammatical problems as the other stories but still good enough to read easily. Keep writing
vjean1997 chapter 13 . 11/20/2014
dreamjanus chapter 2 . 11/8/2014
Noticed some spelling errors...

"a wale of a man" should be whale.
Wale means to make a loud noise, usually associated with sorrow.

"The next weak"...should be "The next week"
The word you used, weak is the opposite of strong.

The last one is the worst,
"raped around his waist"
The word you wanted was 'wrapped'.
The word 'raped' is saying sexual assault, which I am almost sure the giant squid would not do.
dreamjanus chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Technically if you make Harry female, it is not slash. It is either transsexual, which would still make Harry female or AU where Harry was born female. In both cases I can't read them, but I can slash.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/1/2014
weakened not weekend and write not right, honestly, these aren't even all of them, educate yourself
Guest chapter 6 . 11/1/2014
weak not week, new not knew
Guest chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
the story is good but some of the spelling is atrocious, its polite not plight, its second not secant, and wrap not rape, and i think you were thinking of complacent not placid, placid does not mean what you think it means
anonymous chapter 6 . 9/13/2014
I'd like to correct you in your spelling:
Right means the opposite of left and the opposite of wrong;
Write is to place words on paper;
Wright is the spelling for the names of the Wright brothers who invented the airplane.
Other than that, your story is going well, and I think your characters are developing nicely.
jgood27 chapter 13 . 9/6/2014
Loved this story
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