Reviews for Time On Their Hands
Sweetheart From Hell chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Well, this is a review for both this one and "Inside the fire", which I read a week or so ago, was going to review but for some reason didn't... Well, I liked both. Don't know if there is much more to say about it. But I liked them.

Also, since I'm still on the quest of reading all your SPN stuff, I was wondering, you seem to have a lot of bigger things written, the Hand of sorrows 'verse, I think I've seen... However, I have not been able to figure out in which order to read your fics, or if it matters. Or if I've misunderstood something completely. So, some help would be appriciated. (:
uwalumni2 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Sque! I am blushing! Loved it! Want more intimacy between our two boys ! Loving this! They so belong together! I can't get this grin off my face! I am sitting on cloud nine floating with joy..sigh! Awesome! More please : )
xFalconessx chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I loved this. I read your other little short-smut stories, but this is my favorite. Very nice.
Punky chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Dear lord this is the 5th time I've read this and it still turns me on XD

And see? Told you it was good, others agree with me, now I have proof. Now go off and write MORE! XD

(nice title choice by the way )
Anuki chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Wow! This was great. Excellent job!
krissy7490 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
*standing ovation*

VERY nice! : ) Yeah, I know how nerve-wracking it is to write smut, but you did an excellent job! And it does help that Dean and Cas are just a delicious couple to write about! Well done! I'm glad you worked up the courage to post it!
syko33 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Omg. So amazing! Seriously Temi, I NEVER read slash porn and when I do I'm usually like 'gross' or 'yuck' but I was actually turned on *blush*. You're such a good writer! I used to write smut when I was younger all the time because I was a horndog so I have one critique for you, even though you said you weren't ever going to write it again. Instead of using 'dick' and 'cock' (though cock can be used in a very straight forward and commanding way when used in dialogue) try 'throbbing member' or 'rock hard penis'. Anyway, loved it, especially the 'riding out the orgasm' bit. When Dean was inside him I pictured Cas arching his back and his wings cutting themselves out of his shoulder blades. It was hot.

Love,

Kelly :D
smartcookie913 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
i think you did a great job for your first time! congrats!