|Reviews for Challenge #2|
| Lerrinus chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Not bad, not bad at all! I like the last bit about Lucas' prized hair! :-)
| Aquarius chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
that was a great story! One complaint though. It was way too short! You should make it longer.. it's a good storyline! I like your writing you get good ideas!
| All Mighty Terrestrial chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
A new reason not to like Lucas' dad.
| Anubis The Angel Of Death chapter 1 . 8/27/2002
ok now i'm going to ask you to sign at my right shoulder because man you are so great at this i think i should take lession from you though shit i think edger allen poe would have asked you to write the raven for him
| Sammie chapter 1 . 1/1/2002
I liked this story! YOu did a wonderful job writing it! Keep up the great work JOxER! LaterZ!