|Reviews for Among the Living|
| Tylluan chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I like how to do the characterizations. And your post COE world with Jack is so believable. I especially loved the line where Jack realized he could run, but he really couldn't hide:
"They were everywhere he ran. In every corner, he could see them – his young grandson smiling like an innocent boy; his lover quirking an eyebrow in silent code to come play with him. But more than that, he could see all the others who had died along the way, like Owen and Tosh.
"And Jack could no longer see the living."
So true, and beautifully done!
| SA3466996 chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Great job on this. I have to say I love Rhys's quips and Jack's internal struggle. You nailed it.
| CantThinkaNuffin chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I liked the story a lot. Your descriptions of Jack's thoughts and feelings were quite moving, and I can imagine him coming back just to be among the living again.