|Reviews for One Rule|
| RugitusAstra chapter 1 . 1/29
I don't like pineapple. (lol, just kidding, who doesn't like pineapple?)
| servant123 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Fantastic :) It all flowed really well, and you handled the thoughts and dialogue perfectly for each character. It was an absolute joy to read. And I loved your ending author's note ;) Keep writing :)
God bless *heart*
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Well, /anything/ to keep the pineapple stealing monsters away...
This just might be the cutest Psych oneshot I've read so far. It seemed different than other one shots I've read somehow. Maybe because there was closure? (I mean in the way it didn't leave you hanging wondering what happened next or drabbles even though both are great). Or maybe it's just your awesomeness in writing that makes this stand out? Either way it was an all around great job- and not just on the idea or writing style but the fact you can actually spell and usage and /proper/ usage or punctuation and grammar which sadly all too many people on here don't. (Not that I'm perfect in all those areas but I can write in a way other than "text speeh"... okay I'm done with my rant for now.) I liked how you didn't say what Juliet's rule was until close to the end. I couldn't think of any rule Juliet would have but if I had it wouldn't be something this creative, suprising (even though it fits perfectly), non-ciche, and a rule Shawn didn't break. Because really, I don't think there are many rules that Shawn hasn't broken or attempted to. At first I was surprised that Shawn hadn't used that on Jules but it made sense after I thought about it- Shawn would never use something so majorly cliche and cheesy, not to mention serious. You did a great job of writing about this mysterious rule into something of a story, as well as teasing us and guessing, into the rule being revealed. It's a great rule, I know if Juliet was my name I'd hate hearing parts from one of Shakespeare's most well-known play. It was suprising that Shawn knew the play by heart. Although I guess it further shows that Shawn is extremely intelligent, maybe even genius-level, but hides it. Or at least that's what I think based on things Shawn says or does and the rare time he's serious. Anyway this should be enough to keep hordes of pineapple stealing monsters away for awhile. Great job once again!
Amanda (Sorry by the way I was all over the place with this review. There was a lot going on around me and I wanted to review while everything was still fresh in my head or until I got stuck in another story thus forgetting to review.)
| Athyna daughterofposeidon chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I totally burst out laughing during this because we're reading Romeo and Juliet in English, and A. I literally just read those two lines today and B. We're watching that movie in class. That was brilliant!
| IamStoopKid chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I loved this! (:
| sparksfly16 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
| Tempest in Blue chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
This is so cute, and I love that, in the weird Shawn way, it's entirely plausible. :)
| Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
love it! so cute!
| Jane Dorkmaster chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
No! Not the Pinapple Stealing Monsters!
| Chaos Dragon chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
*passes pineapples ftw* so best, this was great. also, great rule.
| Lelouch le Britannia chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
love this, hilarious and cute, you rock
| faerietaleredux chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
"In reality, she only had one rule that she dated or died by." That is such a great line. It's what reeled me into read this, even though I'm not big on the pairing.
"there was really no way to ignore that much … wow. " LOL. I remember Psy vs Psy. The actor didn't seem all that hot-to-trot to me (kind of seemed like a poor man's Benjamin Bratt; though that's not very nice of me to say. He was in LaBamba right, a million years ago?), but that just made the episode and all the girls' infatuation with him all the more hilarious.
I love how you keep us guessing about just what this rule is.
Ooh, how lovely. Her rule wasn't anything overly simple. Not some joke you'd find circulated in email spam. But something someone might genuinely have identity issues over-her name and it's far-too-famous counterpart. Nice job!
My favorite things about Psych are the Gus-Shawn friendship, even the the flashbacks to when their young. But I love all the main characters. For some reason I sort of ship Lassiter/Juliet. But that seems wrong somehow, lol. It's this habit I have of fighting canon. It's ridiculous. Still, I'd much rather Shawn with Juliet then say Rachel Leigh Cook's character. o_0
| angellwings chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
aw, okay that was cute! I have to say that I'm not a big fan of Romeo and Juliet so if I was Jules I would probably have that rule as well. I love the last line! I love all of it actually! Shawn re-enacting both sides of the dialogue! awesome! Gah, I think this will be favorited! Great work!