Reviews for Dot Hack Gu meets WITCH plus Harry Potter
Houndourflame chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Very creative idea, mixing W.I.T.C.H and Harry Potter with .hack/. But could you put quotation marks, like: "What is it, Atoli?" he asked. Readers will get confused without quotation marks. And don't forget to put full stops and comas in the story next time, 'kay?
coquyensaoanhvanyeu chapter 1 . 7/26/2009