Reviews for The Secret of Moonacre Valley
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Please update, if no ones adopt this! :)
miss woodham chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This book is an outstanding book for all is about a girl who's parents have died and goes and lives with her uncle lots of meschivious things happen...one princess of the valley casts a spell on the valley and Maria is the next in line so she has to goand find the pearls.
abigleave chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
i love this please finish it xxxxx
Guest chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
I LOVE YOUR STORY...and I'm only on chapter three!
angelofanime1993 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I loved the whole story on detailed you get with everything. I also love how much you compare Maria with her father and uncle. The story has been great. Just wish I knew who continued it.
Living Like a Loco chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
I LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH ! :D you absoloutely have to update this or ill die! :(
ZapZapYotsuba chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
Oh Cat's teeth! You haven't updated in years :( I was really enjoying your story - it's interesting in the sense that you have created this Diana character who is less prideful, snobbish and hotheaded as her sister Maria. In the real story, which you have based your story upon, Maria starts off with these characteristics but by the end she lets go of her pride and snobbish nature so she can save Moonacre. In your story, Diana is the main character who is equally prideful and snobbish, but towards the opposite things as Maria - it's funny when Maria sees the dress that Loveday lays out for here everyone morning she scoffs at it and like wise with your Diana character, she scoffs at the fashions of her sister and other characters. Diana is just as prideful and bold as Maria, but in her own way. I really love that!

It would have been lovely to see you finish this story for it was a lovely twist to the original - it fit so well and you left us all at such a pivotal point in the story :( Diana is heading out and will most likely head right into the forest where a certain Bandit is awaiting her!

I hope you return to this story some day!
Take The Chopsticks And Run chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
this story is really good. please update soon!
RedRoses224 chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
Hi! I just found your story, and I read it. Please put up another chapter! I love it. Will Robin and Diana fall in love? I need to know
RedRoses224 chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
Hi! I just found your story, and I read it. Please put up another chapter! I love it. Will Robin and Diana fall in love? I need to know
OfTheMylne chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
I'm sorry I know Diana or whatever is going to end up with Robin and I can not help but think that this is improper, that is just my opinion and you do not have to comment on it you have a good vocabulary but I am a Maria fan sorry for this flame. but maybe if Robin had a younger brother or something but I doubt that this will happen thank you and you do not have to reply to this statement if you find it to be how do you put it bullshit once again goodbye.
TeamBlaus4EVER chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Ooo when are Diana and Maria going to see Robin again! Is Big sis gonna like Maria and Robin as a pair? Or is Robin going for Diana? I have to know lol please update soon!
Till-Owlyglass chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
I love this ! Please, please, please update soon!
MissLizziebeth chapter 3 . 12/14/2009
i lurrve it so far! you know, i always did think that Benjamin was quite a nice man just with a hard life :D so i especially lurrved that bit where he winks at Dianna :P i cant wait till Robin comes in a bit more! anyways, please update soon! x
WaterLily1594 chapter 3 . 12/6/2009
This was one of the most well-written fanfics of The little White horse/The Secret of Moonacre. I absolutely loved it! I especially enjoyed the twist of Maria having a elder sister! Does Diana fall in love with Robin? I can't wait for the next part!
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