Reviews for A Champion's New Hope
snow in the darkness chapter 52 . 5/1
GOOD JOB
Jack chapter 28 . 4/23
soooo...harry is totally okay with murdering prisoners, hermione is now some sort of gatekeeper/ultimate being, and ron is an immature piece of shit who will never grow up. you are totally willing to change the personalities of these characters to suit your story so its obvious why ron is the way he is in this story. you enjoy shitting on him. rons only drawback is that he sometimes lets his envy of harry and hermione cloud his judgement. he is cunning, loyal, strong physically and magically, and with his large family he has more to lose than harry or hermione. but that doesnt matter to most of you dipshits in this fandom. you just love to shit on him because he is not perfect. what young teenager is perfect? harry is reckless and tries to do everything by himself, hermione is the worst kind of know-it-all, and ron is jealous of his friends. they all have flaws but you all focus on ron like hes the real bad guy in this story. dumbledore is human, but everyone expects him to be this perfect being. thats one of the things in the fandom i can see because that also happens in the books. whats REALLY surprising is that you all expect this young teenager ron to be a perfect mature gentleman who does not make mistakes. rons mistakes make harry feel bad for a while. boo fucking hoo. harrys mistakes GET PEOPLE KILLED. sirius black is dead because harry didnt trust anyone else to save him but himself. think of who you were as a young teenager and measure yourself against ron. im not just talking about fourth year either. in first year ron sacrificed himself so harry could reach the stone. second year he followed harry into aragogs hollow even with his massive phobia of spiders. ron sacrifices for his friends again and again, and when he does make a mistake he does his best to make up for it. but that doesnt matter to you. all you see is someone you can shit on for making a mistake. i hope to never meet you in real life because i definitely wouldnt meet your perfect fucking standards. i hope to meet your friends though because you obviously only befriend people who are perfect heroes.
Jack chapter 7 . 4/23
i get it. you think ron is a stupid piece of shit. you said you werent going to be bashing dumbledore but bashing ron is okay? character bashing is the literary version of jacking off. how many of us do you think came here to watch you jack off? i definitely didnt. ill read some more chapters but im VERY quickly losing interest.
Jack chapter 2 . 4/23
so basically what youre saying is that your favorite characters are going to be better off in this story but the characters you dont like are going to get shit on.
Guest chapter 51 . 4/21
Ch. 51 nearly killed me… that cliffhanger!
Guest chapter 44 . 4/21
This is one of the most satisfying fics I’ve read in a while.
THANK YOU!
Guest chapter 41 . 4/21
Why couldn’t Harry, in Ch. 41, just tell Daphne what was going on by writing it all somewhere? The snake can’t detect that, and it’s an obvious solution.
JustReadingM8 chapter 52 . 4/23
Great read
montanoaries9 chapter 3 . 4/5
yup i remember now why i dropped it here the last time i tried to read this, im actually quite impressed that he didn't tell cedric about the dragons in chapter 2 but apparently you make him still an idiot and tell cedric what to do, what a disappointment trasg
True Ouroboros chapter 25 . 4/2
this Hermione situation has some serious hellraiser vibes
AganishLottly chapter 19 . 4/2
The forumula is 1.01 elevated to number of days. Ff dont know the formula symbol***
AganishLottly chapter 18 . 4/2
The forumula is 1.01 elevated to number of days. Ff dont know the formula symbol
AganishLottly chapter 17 . 4/2
You got the rate of increase power wrong. If he gets 1% stronger a day then its like compound interest. If you had 1, day 2 you have 1.01. But day 3 you dont get 1% out of 1.01 not 1. That gives 1.0201 and so on. So 1.01number of days. So with a tax of q percent a day after a year he will be 35 times more powerfull, not 5.
Lost chapter 52 . 3/22
I know I'm late but great work! Thanks for your amazing story!
Kamishiro Ryuu chapter 51 . 3/18
Daphne is just going to become a hostage? I really agree with what it is stupid. :)
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