Reviews for The Proposal
Asdfghjkl chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Oh my god! You are the best!
I was like whoa what?
And then the thing.
And they were just kids.
And you fooled me.
That was brilliant!
stayy.b3autiful chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
You legit fooled me. I thought they were older.

This was reaaaaaally good. I was about to start crying.

ICaughtTheFire chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
u so fooled me. i was about to start crying lol
Lizzie05 chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
This was so good. Oh my god, still laughing ;D You really got me there ;D
mimi11052003 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I LOVED this! The ending was cute. I remember making my best guy friend marry me during recess in the second grade.
Kiluca1228 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
OMG! the end caught me by surprise i thought it was set when they were older !
Hpluvr7 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
completly got me there! great story! that was adorable and hilarious!
kaluha jones chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
LOL! I love it!
LittleRedOne chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I love this. I was absolutely not expecting that and it was just brilliant. I like the brotherly moment, but I love it even more upon realizing their ages. So great!

Sandalaris chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Lol. Oh my god, I remember doing that in grade school, well, not me, but my best friend got married by the big metal boat at recess in fourth grade, and I had a missing spelling assignment and had to sit out recess that day. *pouts*
UnapologeticallyMe chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Fooled me for a second, yes. Lol Cute job though!
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Haha, that was so cute. Great job! (: I loved it. Oh, UPDATE! You told me to remind you. xD
bluestreaker14 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
omg that wasn't cool! haha! jk! but you fooled me like really bad. i was so confused when the recess part came. P but that was really good. i liked it a lot. )
Always Juliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
That was so cute! You did foul me! Great job!
go forth chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Haha, this so had me fooled. I was like, "Aww ... poor Joe," and then I read the ending and I knew there was hope. They are so mature for their ages. (;

Hahaha this was amazing. Favorited. (:
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