Reviews for The Tale of the Two Konoha Shinobi
random-k chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
I hope you update this again. Its an interesting story idea so far
d011 chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
This has a really interesting plotline; I really look forward to more :)
flaming rose chapter 4 . 6/11/2013
Hmmmm. Whhoooo-hoooooo! Sure do, Jiraiya! But, hey! The truth is more admireable! Anyway, please somehow BELIEVE/ABLE/LY get Jiraiya and Orochimaru to be friends! Or on-good-terns-rivials! Anyway, thank u again and please take into account my request! Or u could just write it the way u planned to! Oh, and please no pairings. Like, at all. I mean, if it's, like, the first hokage's wife and himself, that stuffs okay, that good, but it just ruins the story -and takes away from the story's plot line- when ur pairing him with her and her with him and him with him and sheep. (Sheep shit. So don't worry; I didn't literally mean sheep!) Anyway, thank u again please consider what I said and peace and happy summer, y'all!
Jessica Black1 chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
pretty good start!
Criminal Minds Faniac chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
This is really one of my favorite stories. Please don't stop writting it!
Criminal Minds Faniac chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
Tobirama gets confided in...
Criminal Minds Faniac chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
He gave them the bells and yet he still gets punched.
Criminal Minds Faniac chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Jiraiya is my favorite character and I look forward to finding out what happens to him!
TheSecondOtherGuy chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
this is dead isn't it?
Fellfire chapter 4 . 8/11/2011
She disappeared immediately after, leaving the ailing time-traveller to nurse his red cheek. "Maybe I should have just shut up and cried. Girls like sensitive guys."


Please Please Continue! I can't wait to see what happens next!
niver chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
I liked this chapter! Nice to see what's happening with the elders.
Dream-Flutist chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
This is a great story! I love how Jiraiya is thinking about his life like a book. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Shaman Psyker chapter 4 . 8/1/2010
dude update soon this stories great
Soraya the All Speaker chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
SQUEEE! HAPPINESS! ITS AN UPDATE! *points a finger and glomps*

Sosososososoos I liked Mito! ) Alot. She is kickass. And the interplay was awesome! ;)

And the bit at the end with Orochimaru, Tsunade and Jiraiya. That was awesome too! 3
Yumetaka Kourui chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
Pretty good, pretty good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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